'Skinny Wings' - [Tora/Hiroto] 1/1

[colberry]

Title:  Skinny Wings
Genre:  Romance, Drama
Pairing:  Tora/Hiroto
Description:  In which Tora arches his crooked back into Hiroto's shaking hands.

Notes:  For bellcheria ♡  This is my first step into Alice Nine's fic-land, so I really hope you like it, love!

Comments

*drags you out of your hiding hole to hold on while I cry my eyes out*

[bellcheria]

OMFG.

AND BITCH I KNEW YOU COULD NAIL THIS PAIRING.

YOUANDTHEM JUST MURDEREDME.

First of all, I love how fragile you displayed Tora and how strong and go-with-the-flow Hiroto is ;w;

he’s hoping Hiroto is one who kisses and tells djsahdjiashuqifgqwudhasud oh god your descriptions of love making are so perfect so beautiful so hardbreaking and I like the way Tora is slightly scared while Hiroto keeps it cool like OMFGOMSOFJDHDKJS and omfogmsdosdmogfmodgm SHINJIIIIdsjakdaskdjnaskdjasdnjkadhks
until Hiroto jerks up with a strangled cry, and Tora wants to whisper how fucking beautiful he is KILLING ME SOFTLY THANKS VERY MUCH.
but that’s it, Tora-shi, don’t worry DYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYINNGGG HEAVEN I HEAR THE ANGELS CALLING MY NAME OMFGNASDKJNSS and then the crimson stains like jesus I don’t know YOU’RE A GODDESS LET ME WORSHIP YOUUU.

Omfg the crease mentioning is COMPLETELY my love, first read it with a Rude/Reno fanfic (FF7 ftw) and I also rub it away when I feel it ;A;

But he’s bundled up to his neck with the thickest scarf he

Re: *drags you out of your hiding hole to hold on while I cry my eyes out*

[colberry]

*pops out of hiding hole to roll around in your comment*

YOU ARE SERIOUSLY TOO KIND TO ME, LOVE. SERIOUSLY.

But thank you so, so much! It was so much fun to write (is that weird? that I enjoyed wringing out all the angst and melodrama I could with these two? XD) and seeing that you enjoyed it makes me so happy yay!

And yeah, I wanted to make Tora a little "fragile" since all the fics I ever read of these two are usually the opposite - Tora-shi all cool and collected, not at all freaked out that he has suddenly developed feelings for his bandmate, etc. So, this is my take on it (metaphorical love-making and all) XD;

GAHH JUST THANK YOU! I ALREADY THANKED YOU ON TWITTER BUT I JUST HAD TO DO IT AGAIN BECAUSE YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE ME SMILE SO WIDE AND YEAH ;A; ♥

Re: *drags you out of your hiding hole to hold on while I cry my eyes out*

[bellcheria]

'to roll around in your comment' xDDD you's SO cuteeee <3

Noooo it's cool!!! And I'm agreeing with everything! I once started writing fanfiction because I disliked the rolls given to certain characters. I wanted to turn things around and one of my favorite Torapon writers is also switching the roles, I like that sort!!

THANK ME EVERYWHERE
EVEN BENEATH THE STAIRS
(what...don't look at me like I'm crazy xD Gavin Degraw's Soldier is playing here!!!)

<33

FVRBTTJH *FLAILS*

[shadow_fictions]

HALF OF MY JROCK OT4 ♥

This was absolutely gorgeous. And I may edit again to quote because I can't do that in my phone XD

But omg so ghjxsdjkoihfddxc

Re: FVRBTTJH *FLAILS*

[colberry]

YAY! What's the other half? :o

Thank you so much, love! I'm happy you enjoyed it :D

Re: FVRBTTJH *FLAILS*

[shadow_fictions]

Aki from Sid and Kenzo from ayabie :3 to make Torakizopon. LOL.

you're always welcome, dear. ♥

[hungryxheart]

This is really the most beautiful thing I've read in a while. I'm really not kidding when I say it sent shivers down my spine.

You captured their emotions so well and your writing style is so enchanting I could spent hours on end reading your fics. Seriously.

[colberry]

Thank you so much! It's such a relief to hear that since it's the first time I truly wrote these two :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it ♥

[eimininja]

This was stunning, I just love the style you wrote this in, it's so perfect. I loved it thank you for posting it!

[colberry]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :DD

[aleksiina_26]

Oh dear...I usually don't really read this pairing, but I am so glad your summary piqued my curiosity.

This was gorgeous and so deliciously bittersweet, it made my heart ache. I have a thing for artfully disjointed, poetic prose and this scratches the itch so perfectly. You could taste the anguish, and the broken promises between the two of them, and you nailed that insidious pain so perfectly...I think I love you ;) Made me realize I don't write enough of this genre at all, and that maybe I'm due for some angst...

I really, really loved this little gem of yours, and I really hope you will foray in the A9 fandom again, because we can definitely use writers as talented as yourself. Seriously, this was utterly exquisite, well done.

[colberry]

Oh wow, thank you so much! I was quite worried about this piece since I've barely written Hiroto and never wrote Tora before, so hearing this is so wonderful, seriously ♥

I'll definitely be around the A9 fandom more often :D