15; infinite; time stops for you, too

Apr 03, 2013 01:39

time stops for you, too | r for mature themes (spoiler: inexplicit sex, suicide)
woohyun/sunggyu
2.6k words
oneshot
it gets happier at the end. unless you read the chronological version. i suggest reading this one first. c:

Woohyun rewinds, and Sunggyu comes to life in his eyes. He presses play and almost tastes him again; sweet, with a bit of ( Read more... )

time stops for you too, infinite

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okaeiri April 2 2013, 19:55:08 UTC
A Woogyu inspired by Nell's "The Day Before", ugh, I can't even express how much I love this <3 Also the structure and the writting is great.

I will wait for future Woogyu fics from you :3

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portaldice April 4 2013, 03:09:17 UTC
Haha, I had to write one <3

Ohh, thank you very much! Please anticipate~ c:

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scheska April 2 2013, 20:09:58 UTC
I was totally swept back to Nell's MV the moment this started... And it made it so much better/worse.

Really good though!

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portaldice April 4 2013, 03:10:41 UTC
Lol I hope it was for the better ;;

Thank you~ c:

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vonegirl1 April 3 2013, 00:05:56 UTC
Well, damn. I mean really. I cried. Tuesday evening, watching "Wheel of Fortune" and you made me cry. And now, like every other fool who'll read this wonderfully written story, I have to thank you. So, fine. Thank you. Well done.

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portaldice April 4 2013, 03:13:31 UTC
Sorry for ruining your Wheel of Fortune evening otl. But thank you for reading and leaving a wonderful comment! c:

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endeuless April 3 2013, 00:42:18 UTC
amazing! I love the original version with all the bits and pieces of the story everywhere and it was nice to be thinking throughout the story, trying to piece everything together in the right order. I love the fact that you included the choronological version as well, and I'm glad I waited until after to read it!

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portaldice April 4 2013, 03:17:03 UTC
oh, thank you very much! i thought really hard about making it anachronic in the first place, so i'm really glad it turned out well. thanks for reading and commenting~ c:

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goodbyethankyou April 3 2013, 06:04:08 UTC
;~;

This is. Tragically heartbreakingly beautiful. I love how the original was jumbled up in a way that complemented the emotions in the story; what with the painful moments laced with a pleasant nostalgia. I cried, though, after reading both the original and chronological versions. This was a really good read.

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portaldice April 4 2013, 03:39:20 UTC
ohh, that's exactly what i was going for in the original! thank you very much~ ;w;

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