Fic: Liminal, Part 2 [Harry/Draco]

[coffeejunkii]

Sorry for the long delay, but the boys were rather stubborn in this chapter...

Liminal, Part 2

Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Category: Futurefic/War, Angst, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, mpreg

Summary: Liminal, from Latin limen, meaning threshold: a state of being in-between.

Thank you to rurounihime for betaing, to akahannah for preventing me from

Comments

[best_of_five]

am i first?? :D

so lovely. you have so many details of those first moments with holly, for both harry and draco. it just tugs at my heart.

♥

oh man, i see what you did to the end. -bites nails- hope everything will be ok (soon).

-coos at little holly and her bright red hair- :)

[coffeejunkii]

yes, you are indeed the first! hee!

thank you! man, this chapter gave me a hard time, but i'm happy with how it turned out.

hmm, yes. can't forget about what's looming over their heads now, can we?

isn't she just the cutest? ♥

[best_of_five]

OMG, ded from the icon.

it is LOVE :D

[coffeejunkii]

you had to know there would be an icon!! i've been dying for weeks now to use it and now i finally can :D.

[wook77]

so beautiful and lovely and soft and just gushingly amazing.

♥ you for this. This touch of softness in the middle of a fairly chaotic life is just what the doctor ordered.

Very nice and I love your neville. He's so squishy that I just want to huggle him. (he doesn't turn them in, does he?) Sorry... pessimistic side escaped there for a second.

[coffeejunkii]

*blushes* thank you so much!

i'm glad it is. it's the same for the boys, i think...finally coming to this point and being alright and knowing holly is fine. all this probably hasn't even sunk in yet for harry during the time covered by the chapter.

thank you! nooo, neville would never turn them in! no worries there.

[best_of_five]

ANY chance at all of ron/neville? -asks-

[coffeejunkii]

er. considering the fact that ron is in romania and in love with hermione, i don't think so! sorry!

and ron/neville, wot? :-?

[pocketroxy]

OMG! this is such a sweet and moving chapter CJ! so many special moments in this chapter - harry - and draco's -response to holly's hair, draco wanting harry to sit in back of him, harry's total discomfiture over all the details and responsibilities of holly...and their sweet kiss over Holly.

I feel for them being stuck underground and having to let others work to free them from their "prison". Can't wait to see more, as usual. This was another great chapter CJ!

[coffeejunkii]

aww, thank you, roxy!! that's so wonderful to hear considering that i agonized over all those moments :). harry's a tad nervous about what awaits him as a parent, yes, but he's also totally smitten with his little girl. as is draco, of course, red hair or not! how did you like the pic?

yeah, they are certainly in a difficult situation there... more about that in the next chapter :).

[pocketroxy]

I hope Draco is okay, he seems off. Can't wait to see what goes on in the next chapter with their situation (as usual)

The pic was so sweet! At first I was thinking that it was Draco and the baby, but then you said that it was a woman. That's fine too. I loved it, it just fit the mood.

Yes, well, taking the time to work with their responses to holly (and her hair) and each other were the touches that just made this chapter so moving. You write Mpreg so well, the emotion is just marvelous. :)

[coffeejunkii]

yes, yes, you will have to wait and see...lalala...

aw, you can totally imagine it's draco and holly *sigh*. when i saw that pic, i knew it was her. i didn't even intend to give her red hair, but there was no way i wasn't going to use that pic :).

thank you ♥. this is such an important moment for the story, and i couldn't imagine not devoting an entire chapter to it.

[winstonmom]

I loved each and every word of this chapter! I think you really captured the uneasy feelings of holding your baby for the first time and thinking of the huge responsibility, that comes with the little bundle of love.
Thanks for sharing this with us, my love to you and your ability to write h/d mpreg etc, knows no boundaries!

[coffeejunkii]

thank you very much! it was very difficult for me to imagine what harry might feel in that moment, and what harry thinks about watching draco with holly. i'm glad it rang true to you.

aww, you are most welcome! i totally love this verse and hearing that others enjoy it just as much makes me want to write a lot more of it :).

[tazza_di_jo]

*totally melts*
*squees feebly from puddle on the floor*

[coffeejunkii]

*pets*

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it so much!