♚ Mask Of Innocence/ prologue

[coffeeinlove]

Mask Of Innocence
Seo Joo-Hyun wore her mask of innocence around like how she wore her heart on her sleeve.......
Starring: Seo Joo-Hyun (as the maknae of the nation) & Jung Yonghwa (as the jerk-face of the nation).

Comments

[haeanna]

I'm uh-so-excited!!
you should..no you MUST continue this..*bribes with some internet cookies*

I see drama there.. not that I'm complaining..

p/s: where's the one shot? does it turn to this already? :)

[coffeeinlove]

I was typing away and then it hit me so my one-shot turned into chapter 1 haha
I'm glad you're excited for this, I'm really nervous since it's my first on-going fic.
I don't know if it will be receive well, please gives it lots of love, ne? >

[haeanna]

haha. so you decided to make it chaptered. don't be nervous. you write because you love to, right? and because yongseo is so love so I think that's enough as your boost of vitamin. receiving lots of love is just a BONUS.

about Seohyun's character..although you write as if she's one of tough swearer, I don't mind it all. It maybe important to write character as spot-on but it depends on which story plot you are heading to..afterall, this is fanfiction.. imagination knows no boundaries..
:)

will be waiting next chap with patient. *fighting*

[coffeeinlove]

thank you for your support, anna!
I will update asap *hugs*

[eddisontrent]

Hum ... an exciting beginning, most definitely, but, uhm, a little bit too many expletives for my taste (I don't think our innocent maknae would swear that much), but besides that, by all means, please continue.

Best regards,
Trent.

[coffeeinlove]

Sorry about the swearing - -"
In the story, she won't be swearing that much actually
I'll probably have her 'not so innocent' in this story but I promise I won't go overboard, all the chapters will have the same amount of swearing words the most but probably will be less haha
and thank you for your comment, I already finished chapter 1 so I'll most likely continue ^^