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Feb 15, 2007 00:08

But Liquor is Quicker
Supernatural
Dean/Jo; R
1,500 words
A/N: for my Valentine, a few minutes late. From her prompt, which was "candy hearts. Take that in any way you will." Thanks to killerweasel and walkawayslowly for read-through.

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pairing: dean/jo, fandom: supernatural

Comments 59

glitterdemon February 15 2007, 05:21:28 UTC

n'aww, jo! god, her throwing the candy hearts at him is just too damn perfect. what a visual. *g*

coffee_in_bed February 15 2007, 05:28:47 UTC

it took me a while to figure out how on earth i was going to work candy hearts into a fic without it being all OOC and saccharine, and when i thought of her pelting him with them, it was too good not to use. :D

mcee February 15 2007, 05:26:40 UTC

okay, dean fingering her from behind? HOT LIKE BURNING.

"Put it in," she pants, shameless and mindless.

so pragmatic and so HOT ;ldfkgdfg.

The bed frame creaks, the headboard knocking against the wall as he fucks into her in short, sharp strokes.

idib.!

his come slicking her thighs.

the devil is in the details and you're going to hellllllll ♥

"The hellspawn needs babysitting," he says absently

aw, dean! bros before hos, always.

these two are so tragic. :\

coffee_in_bed February 15 2007, 05:30:22 UTC

you KNOW i have a thing about *anything* from behind. HOT LIKE FIYAH.

and please, if i'm going to hell, at least i know you're coming with me. <3

mcee February 15 2007, 05:31:40 UTC

i'll bring the dip. \o/

brin_bailey February 15 2007, 05:27:09 UTC

Well that about settles whether or not I'm going to be able to sleep tonight :)

Loved this.

This line especially:

"Sometimes, I think you're almost human. And then I remember that you're a Winchester."

Girl can certainly dish it out, huh?

Anyway, thanks for the awesome read :)

coffee_in_bed February 15 2007, 05:32:34 UTC

i ain't gonna lie... i love that line. :D

and i'm glad you liked this, thanks!

rillaotvalley February 15 2007, 05:34:38 UTC

You know...I wasn't feeling sad for Jo until that last damn line. Pow! Like a shot to the chest: "the deeper ache in her chest, where he always lingers." Now that was crafty.

Great fic...and I love the idea of her winging hearts at him.

coffee_in_bed February 15 2007, 05:45:31 UTC

i've warmed to jo a LOT the past few months, and it was really fun to write her like this. and her chucking the hearts at him just cracks me up. :)

rillaotvalley February 15 2007, 06:04:22 UTC

i've warmed to jo a LOT the past few months

Me, too. And I'm curious what that says about me. Didn't like her at all when she was a possible love interest for Dean. And now that Kripke's called her out as a "little sister" figure, I'm all, "Well, what about Jo?!" LOL...fickle me.

glitterdemon February 15 2007, 08:24:26 UTC

unfortunately, the "little sister" declaration seems to coincide exactly with the moment they decided to make her interesting.

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sevenfists February 15 2007, 05:44:10 UTC

Oh god, hot AND angsty. Poor Jo. :( :( I kind of wish she HAD thrown the knife at him. Dean's so infurating.

coffee_in_bed February 15 2007, 05:48:54 UTC

if she'd thrown the knife at him, she'd have killed him, dude. even with shoddy aim, i'm pretty sure she's lethal.