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coffee_in_bed

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Dec 21, 2006 23:52

Tempus Fugit
CW RPF
Jared/Jensen/Sandy; R
1,200 words
A/N: Written for rps_advent, for the "Superpowers" prompt. Thanks to sevenfists for helping bend it into shape, and to mcee for her endless whip-cracking.

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fandom: cw rpf, pairing: jared/jensen/sandy

Comments 11

simplybeing December 22 2006, 05:34:04 UTC

I STAND BY EVERYTHING I ALREADY SAID. *flail*

coffee_in_bed December 22 2006, 06:35:36 UTC

\o/\o/\o/

buhfly December 22 2006, 18:23:31 UTC

Ooooooh, I like this a LOT.

coffee_in_bed December 22 2006, 21:37:16 UTC

thank you!

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coffee_in_bed December 23 2006, 03:57:24 UTC

thank you, sweetie! i ended up ditching my first two attempts, and then had to write this one all in a rush, but it turned out all right in the end! so i'm very, very glad that you liked it so much.

and thank you! i've had that layout for a while now, but i LOVE it.

culturegeek76 December 23 2006, 04:45:11 UTC

I like how you captured that trace of sadness, listlessness as he watches Sandy and Jared. Seems more likely than a penthouse forum version of the same scenario. I like how you time shift and bring it all back around. Very nice.

coffee_in_bed December 23 2006, 15:27:43 UTC

thanks so much! i love the idea of "be careful what you wish for, because you just might get it," and it was neat to play with that a little bit.

cathybites December 27 2006, 01:19:30 UTC

oh, this is fascinating! I love how everything kind of flows and melts into one another, but it has these sharp, almost jagged little edges to it. it's lovely.

coffee_in_bed December 27 2006, 01:47:36 UTC

thank you, baby! i had so much trouble with this thing, i can't even tell you. by the end i was so down to the wire i had no idea wtf i was writing. which, actually, probably helped!