Comments | cofax7: NEW SPN: Five Families John Winchester Never Had (Teen, Bob)

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NEW SPN: Five Families John Winchester Never Had (Teen, Bob)

Jan 23, 2008 17:27

Title: Five Families John Winchester Never Had
Author: cofax
Rating: Teen, Bob
Spoilers: Generally through season 2
Summary: Five roads that might have been taken. 4,500 words. Notes at end.

( Five Families John Winchester Never Had )

spn-fic

Comments 71

hossgal January 24 2008, 02:42:09 UTC

Wooter-ation.

(Is a word? Is a word.)

I like both the new sections - esp how the Dean that comes out of CPS isn't the Dean we know in canon. I like how you turned around the last one, as well - this version fits the theme much better. (But I'm still missing, a little, that other woman, that other home, and how nothing, in the end, was made better.)

- hg

cofax7 January 24 2008, 03:02:19 UTC

I think I may salvage Merrill, somehow. We'll see.

cofax7 January 24 2008, 03:07:32 UTC

And thank you!

(I hate the first couple of hours after posting a story, because I just can't stop hitting refresh. My insecurities, let me show you them!)

hossgal January 24 2008, 03:55:24 UTC

HA! No, don't hand them to me, I have my own matching set. *g*

(First! I was first to comment! MMMWWWAHAHAHAAHA!)

(I guess I should go write now...)

- hg

janissa11 January 24 2008, 03:18:49 UTC

These are all fabulous, but I have a special hardcore soft spot for more Winchesters, and the last one is PERFECT. Aw man. Great stuff!

cofax7 January 24 2008, 03:29:31 UTC

YAY someone liked it!

(I was worried that the title would put too many people off.)

The last one is pure self-indulgent wish-fulfillment on my part, and it was very fun to write. I'd never found John/Mary all that hot, actually, until I wrote that scene, and went, "Oh, so that's how it is." Heh.

What a lovely icon that is!

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cofax7 January 24 2008, 03:40:23 UTC

Thank you!

tassosss January 24 2008, 03:47:14 UTC

This was wonderful! My favorite was the last one, because I'm a sucker for happy endings. 1, 2, and 4 are just heartbreaking and make me think that for all his faults, John made the right decision in keeping the boys with him. Even with the difficulties he and Sam have in canon, I never doubt that they love each other, even if they have a hell of a time showing it or reading it in the other.

Job well done!

cofax7 January 24 2008, 05:43:53 UTC

I, too, am a sucker for happy endings. Thank you for your lovely comments!

e_juliana January 24 2008, 04:08:04 UTC

\o/ SO HARD. Picture me running around my apartment doing the PG arms right now.

I think I may have thinky thoughts, but, DAMN, I loved this.

cofax7 January 24 2008, 05:44:30 UTC

YAY! \o/

So glad you liked it!