Oh, I like Carol! She and Cody seem to have fun together...And you ended it very cruelly!! Evil people.
I do love the odd reference you make to Randy and Cody's past relationship - it's not so much what they say to each other but what they seem to be thinking. In the last chapter there was some mention of a funny look on Randy's face when Cody said he had never been in love. And then here again - “Not at the time we broke up, no… not that he looked too closely…" They may have moved on, but it seems that there are still a lot of unresolved feelings between these two boys. Makes me a bit sad for them...*sniff*
(and - did you guys ever decide on John's age? :D)
Don't they, though! I'm so glad we got them talking, cuz... like I said above, Cody needed a work friend! Heh, well, next chapter will pick up RIGHT where this ended. ;)
Makes me a bit sad for them...*sniff* Right? Like, what would have happened if they got together now, would they be able to make a future together? I think it does help that they're still good friends, though, because it gives them a chance to be together so much... but now that they have John and Ted respectively, I think it also helps them to see that maybe breaking off the sexual side of their relationship was a good thing.
Haha, yes. John's in his early 30s we decided on! Like, 32ish...
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Haha, we're getting there! I promise! Slowly but surely... date night will be written...
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Congrats on the award! It was definitely well deserved!
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Thank you! I'm so thankful to everyone who voted for this!
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I do love the odd reference you make to Randy and Cody's past relationship - it's not so much what they say to each other but what they seem to be thinking. In the last chapter there was some mention of a funny look on Randy's face when Cody said he had never been in love. And then here again - “Not at the time we broke up, no… not that he looked too closely…" They may have moved on, but it seems that there are still a lot of unresolved feelings between these two boys. Makes me a bit sad for them...*sniff*
(and - did you guys ever decide on John's age? :D)
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Makes me a bit sad for them...*sniff*
Right? Like, what would have happened if they got together now, would they be able to make a future together? I think it does help that they're still good friends, though, because it gives them a chance to be together so much... but now that they have John and Ted respectively, I think it also helps them to see that maybe breaking off the sexual side of their relationship was a good thing.
Haha, yes. John's in his early 30s we decided on! Like, 32ish...
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