I must have read this fic about ten times by now - and I effin' LOVE it. it's like the fic I always wanted to read but would never be able to write. EVERYTHING I want is in there - superheroes, backstory, angst, pining, awesome sex, bonus centon (and how hot would cop!Randy be??), bratty Cody, and a perfect ending - I adore endings that have resolution but don't feel like The End. (And should you ever feel the need to sequel this, I won't be complaining :))
Batman was the movie in my head when I was reading, maybe because you wrote it so dark and gothicy - and it made it all so wonderfully easy to imagine.
So I laughed - And what an ass that particular bad guy has… wait, no, bad Ted!
And I oooh-ed - Cringing, Ted swung a leg out, catching Dashing’s ankle and sending him sprawling to the floor, gun clattering to the ground but mercifully not going off. Shoving it away with one gloved hand as he pinned the slighter man’s body to the ground by straddling his hips Ted then wrapped his other hand around Dashing’s throat.And I gasped
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Phew... You have no idea how glad I am you like it! I toyed with the idea back and forth for days before I finally settled on this xD
And *points down* you have the awesome S to thank for proofreading and giving me a second opinion or you'd probably still be waiting for this now haha.
Yep, minor Batmanesque beginning, which I wasn't sure would work, not going to lie, but I'm glad that it worked out anyway and didn't take away from anything, and that the solo sexy times worked for you since it's been a while since I've written anything solo hehe >.>
As for a sequel I'll definitely consider it if I ever think of a way to keep it going :P
I know I told you before that I really enjoyed this, but I'm gonna say it to you again. It's sad how they drifted apart, but I know they'll find their way back to each other again. I would never object to more of this universe if you choose to return to it!
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Batman was the movie in my head when I was reading, maybe because you wrote it so dark and gothicy - and it made it all so wonderfully easy to imagine.
So I laughed - And what an ass that particular bad guy has… wait, no, bad Ted!
And I oooh-ed - Cringing, Ted swung a leg out, catching Dashing’s ankle and sending him sprawling to the floor, gun clattering to the ground but mercifully not going off. Shoving it away with one gloved hand as he pinned the slighter man’s body to the ground by straddling his hips Ted then wrapped his other hand around Dashing’s throat.And I gasped ( ... )
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And *points down* you have the awesome S to thank for proofreading and giving me a second opinion or you'd probably still be waiting for this now haha.
Yep, minor Batmanesque beginning, which I wasn't sure would work, not going to lie, but I'm glad that it worked out anyway and didn't take away from anything, and that the solo sexy times worked for you since it's been a while since I've written anything solo hehe >.>
As for a sequel I'll definitely consider it if I ever think of a way to keep it going :P
All in all thanks for loving it xD! <3
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And yup, if I ever get the idea I promise I'll do a sequel!
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