[OOC Concrit post]
How's my driving? Please let me know the things you like and dislike about my Mello, how I can improve and what I shouldn't change. (I-in case you think that the problem is his English, be certain that I'm doing my best to learn. orz)
Comments will remain screened unless you request for them to be unscreened, but I'm afraid that anonymous posts are off. I'm looking for honest and serious crit, not for butthurt kids to fill my journal with their typical anon wank. I don't eat people, so don't be afraid to tell me what you think, even if you completely disagree with the way I play him! I appreciate honesty (as well as good manners), so there's no need to hide.
Thank you in advance!
Comments will remain screened unless you request for them to be unscreened, but I'm afraid that anonymous posts are off. I'm looking for honest and serious crit, not for butthurt kids to fill my journal with their typical anon wank. I don't eat people, so don't be afraid to tell me what you think, even if you completely disagree with the way I play him! I appreciate honesty (as well as good manners), so there's no need to hide.
Thank you in advance!