A Boy and the Sea [2/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Two.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: He's never known a minute to last for so long.

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Two

Their father says nothing at first when they reappear at the cabin, and his expression doesn’t even change despite

Comments

[faricsyung]

Baby Junsu ~~~ I want to pinch his nose/cheeks and bring him around ~~~ SO CUTE!! <333333

I love the interactions between the characters!! Especially Jae and his father, and the cousins. There's some air of 'hey lookie we're men' in those. (Ohmy- Sad attempt at explanations, but yeah. ._.)

Oh Changmin. Something's up with you.. Not a ghost, but a presence? Play of words? I shall wait for more hints. xDD

I like this AU. I have no problem imagining it's real. Thanks for this. ;DD <3

[coconutjack]

LOL. yunchun do have that air don't they? in this fic at least. what a couple of hams. XD

baby!su is loving all this attention, i assure you. XD

not a ghost nor a presence. hehehe. any more guesses?

i'm glad you like it! thanks very much love. <333

[coconutjack]

damn, wrong tags. forgive me for that. XD

[faricsyung]

LOL. No worries. I got you. xD <3

I'll guess more when you give more hints! =P

I think I told you before, but I like how you write interactions between men/boys. It hits at all the right spots. I can totally see my brothers/cousins in them. Also, fathers. I think they're the most underrated when it comes to love, because they can't really show/understand the love for their children openly like mothers do. ._.

I should stop spamming your page and just wait for your next update. LOL. <33

[coconutjack]

i'm partial to boys since i grew up close to my dad and surrounded by brothers. so i understand them more. ^^ father-children relationships always were a gem to write because some dads (like mine) really suck (pardon the term) at showing affection.

will update soon. :)

[faricsyung]

Ahh ~ About the same as me. I'm the only girl in my family. ;D But it's one thing to live among them and understand, another to write about them realistically close. ^^

No rush. I'm okay with your pace. ;D