A Clear Midnight [2/3]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Clear Midnight
Character: Jaejoong POV, but includes all the rest
Length: 2/3
Rating/Genre: NC-17 for Jaejoong's language; angst
Summary: At around half-past ten, I was sprawled across several chairs in the terminal, staring up at the ceiling, reflecting on my goddamned life and how everything that had to do with me was so fucked up. I could

Comments

[ninjacatherine]

I read the previous chapter earlier and I really like this fic. ^^ Angsty but Jae's memories are ♥. I really like your writing style and the story is interesting. I hope we get to know more about his past and I wonder what's going to happen when he's back in Seoul.

[coconutjack]

thank you for the compliments! ^^ especially since it's my first time writing dbsk fanfiction.

I find Jae very lovable in this fic. he's just so lonely and miserable you just want to hug him. i won't reveal much since everything will be unfolded by the last chapter but i really appreciate you commenting! stay tuned~

[ch_ar_me]

I love how you write this story. Everything seems so messed up, and I am keen to know how you're going to end this XD

Hopefully what happened will be revealed in the next chapter...? ^^

♥

[coconutjack]

^^ thank you~~!

it is pretty messed up. i'm not even sure if things will be put to rights again. ^^;; we'll see.

[chuchama]

Still incredible. I love how you're painting Jaejoong's character through how he is now, his memories of the past, and his thoughts. It's really cleverly written, this little story. ♥

[coconutjack]

this jae i think is the most complex character i've ever created. as a person i think he's pretty complicated, so your compliment really warms my heart. ^^ i'm also glad you think my little tale is worth reading. ^^ thank you!~~

[blurmeese]

ne, I thought I read this but I didn't :O Ack late comment, sorry! Here we go then-

You wrote out jae's memories like WOAH, it's detailed enough to give the reader a good mental picture to work with but it's not extravagantly long/draggy which is brilliant. On top of that, you brought forward the mood from the chapter before, keeping it very much in the same tone (which is !@#$ing hard to do :O) and guhhh everyone here is just !@#$ed up and beautiful and your way with words is <3.

Damn that was long. *reads chap.3*

[coconutjack]

it's perfectly ok, late comments are still much loved and appreciated~~ ^^

this jae didn't seem to be the type to bore someone with his long memories, so i didn't bother. he's got some kind of add/adhd going, which i find endearing. ^^ thank you for the lovely compliments! i think your writing is SUPERB.

[zhyune]

an angsty continuation :DD but I loved it so much! Jae's dad sounds like a big booboo meanie. And I love how you described Jae's therapist, like some preying mantis *imagines the look* XDDDD

*hops off to the last chapter!*