Lost Boys [8/11]

[coconutjack]

 Title: Lost Boys
Character: Changmin-centric, but everyone's going to appear in it.
Length: 8/11
Rating/Genre: PG in general; it's AU haha.
Summary: Deep inside of him, Changmin knows he shouldn’t be eavesdropping, lest he should hear things he wouldn’t want to know, but his curiosity is piqued and he props himself up on one arm (careful not to touch

Comments

[crimeis]

This chapter was more subtle than the previous ones, not too intense. It's nice, the vibe and tone. It's like ChangMin is getting used to everything but you know... I feel like you're hiding something about JaeJoong. :DDD Haha, or maybe I'm reading too much into things. Suspicious...

I don't want ChangMin to leave. Haha. I, too was getting used to him with the guys. Darn but then again if ChangMin does leave, he would be able to help them financially as well and give them a better life since he's the son of a wealthy man. Hmm, I like how everyone protects ChangMin. :DD Even though they don't have much but they are in it together, more cozy than real families. ♥♥

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed reading and can't wait to see what you're going to come up with next. :DD Wah, haha I finally caught up with the update and isn't as late as before. Yes! This already pawns my morning.

[coconutjack]

thank you for the lovely compliments! ^^

well min can't stay there forever. he's planning to escape everything he knew before. ^^ i think the other guys know that deep inside min is really not one of them, which is why they're so protective. jae is still secretive but i doubt he'll stay that way for very long. ^^

[butterflyweb]

This is one of those fics that is just so damn good that you forget it's fiction. There's this quiet desperation underneath all of it and my stomach twists a little tighter with each chapter, because I feel like there's this giant...thing...coming and I'm all nerve-wracked.

I love the complexity of Jaejoong's character--how he masks his fear with anger and pretends not to care to hide how much he does--and Changmin's determination to live the life he's chosen. Definitely takes some guts.

I feel like I'm missing something big and I can't wait to find out what it is.

[coconutjack]

keke~ ^^ well, you're definitely on to something. we'll see how everything turns out.

changmin's a brave boy, and jae is...well, he's jae. XD

thank you for reading and thank you as well for the lovely compliments!

[sharkbait_ha]

oh goodness. I love yous. I gots to go, but for real, Jaejoong is so amazing. I don't know how this will turn out, but I'm excited~!
<3

[coconutjack]

^^ thank you!~ <3 fic!jae is loving this attention, i'm sure. lol.

[chloe1910]

You are still giving the Jaeho vibe here...I dunno why...I know many of us are actually hoping about Jaemin (don't get me wrong, both pairs are my OTP)...but somehow, my instinct tells me it's Jaeho here

[coconutjack]

^^ on the pairings comment.

yes, min is getting used to the life he's currently living, but it won't be long before he continues with his plan to finally leave. he's very naive still, our min, and plans to go through and conquer the world on his own, to find himself. i doubt he'll...wait, i'll shut up now and i'll let the other chapters just tell the story. ^^

[kenshinjunkie03]

i just got caught up on this story...i can't believe i would pass something like this up, but it was the summary of this chapter that got me hooked. it will be sad to see changmin go, but i feel a big change is coming.

i do love this story, and i can't wait for more^^

[coconutjack]

hi and welcome! thank you for the lovely comment and i'm glad you like it!~ ^^ well, as i've said before, min can't stay, but...well we'll see. ^^

stay tuned! ^^