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KHRMINIBANG 2009 FINALLY OPENS
~Requiem in the Rain~
[14.443 words]
And that is my fic. GO! READ! IT! NAO!
The fic that I wrote when I was in the middle of exams. The 14k words fic that I wrote in less than a week. The fic that I planned to write since a year ago. The fic that I put all my sweat, blood, and effort, and tears, to write. The fic about ( Read more... )
the way you write those feelings and situations is adorable ;A;
oh lol at first I frowned deeply, "did Amano ever draw Yamamoto's mather?"
and "because I don't follow Reborn anymore or not, but who's Fubuki?"
carefree people looks more pitiful then they who can let their sadness showed right on their face
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LET ME BREATHE BEFORE I REPLY TO YOUR COMMENT!
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I AM LOVING YOU SO MUCH FOR READING IT! ;_______;
And my favourite part is the last stage too~ It's the longest of the three and gee, I think I cried a little when I wrote how Yama mama died? /brick'd
No, Amano never draws Yama Mama. That's why I wrote this fic, to just fill my desire to see what kind of background Yama has.
AND FUBUKI IS AN OC! LOL. I thought I've put the brief explanation on the endnote.
And yes, that carefree boy keeps so many things inside his head that I didn't know of and I think I almost banged my head to figure out how to delve into his brain. But I work it out! /o/
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yes, I did read the endnotes then I 'ooh'ed
I sometimes 'OH YAMAMOTO, WHAT'S ON YOUR HEAD, JUST GTFO AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK! WHY DON'T YOU BE HONEST WITH YOUR OWN FEELINGSSSS'
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Then you'd understand how I feel right? Because I HAD TO WRITE HIM, DAMNIT! He's not even my favourite character! And I sacrificed blood and tears for him. TT-TT.
Do you think the story is believable? And is it in character enough?
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the story is really believable and acceptable, because it is simple enough but you put much efforts to write those Yama's feelings in order to make the readers fell within it
Yama's dilemma part is lovable
but the feel of rain doesn't catch me really up, in short, needs more touch of rain?
even though, like, I could imagine those scene on my mind ♥
no, I'm no good at giving critiques when it's about fict x__x;;
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Well, my only excuse is that I was too bloody tired to do anything to this fic again after I finished writing it. Believe it or not, the only changes I made from the first draft I sent to the mods when the first deadline came up, is just some grammar checking and few tweaking on the first part. I'm just this kind of writer who doesn't really want to touch a finished product after I already deal with it.
And my drained brain was just too tired already.
But it's still good! I think this is one of my best KHR fics. And surely will be the last for a long time because I don't really have the muse to continue writing the rest of my KHR fic WIP.
It's okay, bb. Even just a mere fangirling over the fic is enough for me. No, actually, knowing you reading it is already enough for me. THANK YOU! /glomps
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