Title - Absolution Author - my_kakistocracy Rating - R to be safe Pairings - Nash/Cobb (but Nash-centric) Word count - 1300 Warnings - Abuse, general iffiness Disclaimers - Not mine.
A/N: Basically inspired by koushi 's The Red Look.
KATIE, I FEEL REALLY BETRAYED RN.kirstenlouiseFebruary 22 2011, 14:48:16 UTC
I don't know that I can forgive you for keeping this talent hidden. I mean, that's just really shitty of you. HDU, KATIE. HDU NOT REVEAL HOW FUCKING AMAZING YOU ARE...until now. :O!
In a word, this is incredible. Your Nash has such a strong voice, which is interesting, juxtaposed next to how much of a spineless bastard he is with regards to Dom. First person is one of those things that can be done so well when done right and this? This is a textbook example of doing it right. The first person perspective adds so much to this piece. I love how I'm just totally in Nash's head. It's a rather terrifying, yet darkly humorous, place to be and I'm not sure I ever want to leave.
I'm going to quote a ridiculous amount now, but know that I restrained myself. This is so fucking quotable, I don't even---
Yet one billion Catholics still bust out the rosary beads after every infraction. You know why? At the end of the day, people don’t want something for nothing. It makes them feel uncomfortable, like they’re just waiting for the catch, for the
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Re: KATIE, I FEEL REALLY BETRAYED RN.my_kakistocracyFebruary 22 2011, 18:39:49 UTC
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I LOVE YOU TOO, KIRSTEN.
IDK even what got into me last night, I just sat down to play some Tetris had suddenly my brain was like "Nash has feeeeeelings write them down!"
I can never sit down with the intention of writing something, it just has to ~hit me. To be perfectly honest, you are such an amazing writer that I struggled with even posting this here because I AM SOMEWHAT INTIMIDATED BY YOUR AWESOME.
I am so happy that you liked it, I FEEL VALIDATED. And it's a good feeling, indeed.
Re: KATIE, I FEEL REALLY BETRAYED RN.kirstenlouiseFebruary 22 2011, 18:45:36 UTC
I can never sit down with the intention of writing something, it just has to ~hit me.
Sort of like a mack truck? ;)
Seriously, though, how can you even be intimidated by what I write when this amazing thing is your brainchild? I am legit embarrassed for my Nash. He needs to step it up a notch or fifteen just to have a hope of competing with yours. PLZ BE MAKING NASH HAVE FEELINGS ALWAYS, KATIE, OR I MAY DIE OF SADNESS.
In a word, this is incredible. Your Nash has such a strong voice, which is interesting, juxtaposed next to how much of a spineless bastard he is with regards to Dom. First person is one of those things that can be done so well when done right and this? This is a textbook example of doing it right. The first person perspective adds so much to this piece. I love how I'm just totally in Nash's head. It's a rather terrifying, yet darkly humorous, place to be and I'm not sure I ever want to leave.
I'm going to quote a ridiculous amount now, but know that I restrained myself. This is so fucking quotable, I don't even---
Yet one billion Catholics still bust out the rosary beads after every infraction. You know why? At the end of the day, people don’t want something for nothing. It makes them feel uncomfortable, like they’re just waiting for the catch, for the ( ... )
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I LOVE YOU TOO, KIRSTEN.
IDK even what got into me last night, I just sat down to play some Tetris had suddenly my brain was like "Nash has feeeeeelings write them down!"
I can never sit down with the intention of writing something, it just has to ~hit me. To be perfectly honest, you are such an amazing writer that I struggled with even posting this here because I AM SOMEWHAT INTIMIDATED BY YOUR AWESOME.
I am so happy that you liked it, I FEEL VALIDATED. And it's a good feeling, indeed.
Yes, we can all get married. Pooly marriage. :P
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Sort of like a mack truck? ;)
Seriously, though, how can you even be intimidated by what I write when this amazing thing is your brainchild? I am legit embarrassed for my Nash. He needs to step it up a notch or fifteen just to have a hope of competing with yours. PLZ BE MAKING NASH HAVE FEELINGS ALWAYS, KATIE, OR I MAY DIE OF SADNESS.
You >>>>>> me.
POOLY MARRIAGE FOREVAH. ♥♥♥
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