The Shadows Will Fall, Part 2/2 (Gen/Attolia, PG)

Dec 09, 2012 00:08

The Queen's Thief AU, second half of this!

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gen/attolia, the queen's thief

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loquaciousquark December 9 2012, 20:30:56 UTC
Ahhh, this was lovely. I feel like this fandom doesn't lend itself to AUs very well for whatever reason, so this was an especial pleasure to read. (Of course, it doesn't hurt that it was so beautifully written, either!)

Thank you so much for sharing this!

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coalitiongirl December 16 2012, 05:45:14 UTC
Thank you! Heh, I've been rereading the books and thinking up all ~kinds of AUs, though I doubt many will make it to paper. There are so many stories left unwritten in canon itself to provide fodder for ficcers!

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mander_lee December 11 2012, 03:13:47 UTC
Yay, that was so beautiful! I really wouldn't mind if QoA *had* turned out this way. Even without the choppity-chop, their relationship is still filled with tension and strong love! And the writing is amazing, still. Thank you for these wonderful pieces!

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coalitiongirl December 16 2012, 05:50:19 UTC
Thank you! Heh, I'd say ~in spite of~ the choppity-chop! Though I think that level of fearlust adds a richness to their relationship that no alternate canon would touch. :D

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penny_lane_42 December 13 2012, 20:49:36 UTC
where she squeezes Eugenides’s bracelet between her fingers and struggles to find the balance between her affected tension and the tension she’s summoned forth by sending the Thief of Eddis home.

PERFECT.

I HAD HOPED THAT THE SOLDIER WAS COSTIS AND IT IS COSTIS I AM SO HAPPY I LOVE COSTIS SO MUCH.

. Costis speaks of Eugenides with an odd sort of wonder mingled with frustration, a combination the Queen has come to associate with her Thief.

Hahaha: yes!

even her Thief lacks the resources to take a throne

Hahaha! Love!

“To spend that much time with you without turning to murder? He deserves no less.”

WORDS OF TRUTH.

I stole you, and you’re still here, and I will not have the Mede take you from me!”

His eyes narrow at her phrasing. “I am here because I want to be here. I do what I want.”

“No.” Her voice is cold, her veins like ice with fury. “Not in my home, in my room. In my country. You are mine now.”

D Y I N G

His eyes soften with compassion, and she loathes it and craves it all at once. “Have you stolen a Thief, or ( ... )

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coalitiongirl December 16 2012, 05:59:13 UTC
I LOVE COSTIS TOO OMG i wish i'd been able to fit him in more here principled impressionable bb!

and also THANK YOU for your feedback i generally get a sense of what works and what doesn't in a fic based on reactions i get, but in a tiny fandom like this one i don't have that luxury so i am very grateful that you took the time to review it like this! <3

i might write more i reread QoA again this weekend why did you rec these books what am i supposed to do with myself now~

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filkferengi December 19 2012, 19:06:36 UTC
This is quite unfairly lovely!

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magicsandwiches March 22 2013, 20:05:26 UTC
Seriously? I love this story so much. I'm almost crying. You have no idea how much I needed this today.

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