Round One: The Ladies

Dec 11, 2011 18:23

Until December 25th

Participants should comment on this thread and provide a character and prompt to provide general direction for the fill. Prompts can be in the form of quotes, single words, or scenarios.

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themed round, theme: ladies

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anonymous December 12 2011, 00:33:18 UTC
Emily Prentiss, what she thought of when she woke up in that hospital in Bethesda and learned she had to walk away from her life as she knows it

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FILL PG-13 1/1 anonymous December 12 2011, 02:07:56 UTC
She should have died. And if she is completely honest, she'd rather be dead.
Because this, this isn't what she wanted. She's tired, so tired of running, of being afraid of her own shadow. She wants to have a home, wants to belong. She wants to stay. More than anything, she wants to remain with the people she loves, the family the team is.
But she can't. She did this to protect them. She went after Doyle, on her own, because she couldn't allow any of them to get sucked into this. This is her war, her past. Her friends, her family, they didn't sign up for this.
She made her choice. Now she has to continue protecting them. As much as it hurts, as much as she knows they will hurt, she knows that it's the only way. Emily Prentiss is dead. She died on the table. Just vanishing into thin air wasn't enough this time, this time it had to be real. She died and her team buried her.
And now she has to leave Emily Prentiss behind, has to leave her past and everyone in it behind. All her accomplishments, they don't mean anything anymore. Because they ( ... )

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 just_jasper December 12 2011, 02:10:04 UTC
This is wonderful, she must have gone through so much during that time, it's great to see more fic of it.

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 charleswhatnow December 12 2011, 02:13:06 UTC
Ahhh. This is so lovely and wonderful and sad. Thank you for writing it!

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 winklevii December 12 2011, 02:14:45 UTC
This is so wonderful!

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 anonymous December 12 2011, 02:15:25 UTC
love this

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 anonymous December 12 2011, 03:05:34 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you guys like it =)

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 doctaj10 December 12 2011, 05:16:33 UTC
Great stuff. Love the perspective.

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 ficdirectory December 12 2011, 14:04:56 UTC
I love this! So like her.

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Re: FILL PG-13 1/1 alidiabin June 19 2012, 10:21:28 UTC
This captures her feelings so well. So painful.

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[FILL] Shadows [PG 1/1] fixmecinderella December 13 2011, 03:51:28 UTC
She wants to leave.

Leave this room, this building, this city, and this state. She doesn’t want be here. She will walk, she will run. Yet if all she can do is crawl because of this pathetic, this broken condition she is currently in, she will do just that because she simply doesn’t want to be here.

She can’t be here.

She wants to go back to them. She wants to go back home.

They are her home.

The home she has longed for ever since she can remember. The home filled with tears, fears, and laughs. And the home where all she ever felt had been security, hope and ultimately, love because through the five years they have spent together, they are everything she could wished for, they are everything she would die for.

And she did because Emily Prentiss never made it off the table.

She can’t go home.The water rises in her vision. She blinks once and twice only for salty beads to form at the corner of her eyes and caught by the hospital scented pillow. Her beating heart is gripped at, her cold hands fist and her dry mouth parts ( ... )

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Re: [FILL] Shadows [PG 1/1] fixmecinderella December 15 2011, 01:11:45 UTC
Thank you for enjoying! =D

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Re: [FILL] Shadows [PG 1/1] just_jasper December 14 2011, 00:42:17 UTC
This was painful, thank you for posting this fill.

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Re: [FILL] Shadows [PG 1/1] fixmecinderella December 15 2011, 01:12:29 UTC
Thank you & you're welcome!

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