Impossible Illogical Bonds

[cmdrtekk]

Title: Impossible Illogical Bonds of the Spark

Rating: PG-13

Characters: Prowl, Sideswipe, Ratchet, Ironhide, Optimus Prime

Warnings: Off page death of major characters, euthanasia hinted at & mentioned, intimate relationships between robots who use male pronouns to describe themselves hinted at/suggested/discussed, angst and emotionally worn down

Comments

[cmdrtekk]

Many thanks. I fixed the spelling you caught as well as three other errors that jumped out while looking for them. It's all still pretty rough though.

Again, thank you.

[mmouse15]

This is sad, yet wonderfully done. I love the description of the twins bringing Prowl's comet form down to Earth, and the anxiety engendered by Prime's wish to keep Prowl on-line. Very evocative stuff you've written here.

ETA: May I put this in the newsletter for this week?

[cmdrtekk]

Thank you for the thoughts. I have continued to wonder if I should have taken it beyond Prowl's section as doing so really changed the whole story. Yet, this one nearly wrote itself.

Yes you may put this in the newsletter.

[renegadewriter8]

Poor Prowl! I loved how the crew rebelled against Prime for keeping Prowl away from Jazz. Sad fic but beautiful!

[cmdrtekk]

Thank you.