Hope on Fire, for calleigh_j, Emily/JJ, FRAO

[cmexchangemods]

Title: Hope on Fire
Author/Artist: darkhawkhealer
Recipient: calleigh_j
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: FRAO
Word Count: 4,483
Warnings/spoilers: Spoilers for everything up to and including 5.05, Cradle To Grave, implied AU for everything after that. =)
Summary/prompt: When the streets are aflood like a fever / It's a holiday of the new / We're coming closer now to the truth

Comments

[innerslytherin]

"What would I do with one?" He asks blankly, then shoots JJ a pleased smile when Emily huffs a small laugh and shakes her head, hiding her smile by looking out the window.

This might be my favorite sentence, seeing Reid as not quite as oblivious as he pretends to be, just to get Emily to laugh.

I love that the Ambassador knew what was going on and called JJ...and it didn't scare JJ off. JJ asking Emily about not getting many second dates is my next favorite sentence. *G*

[darkhawkhealer]

*g* JJ doesn't scare easy. Thank you for everything -- I know femmeslash isn't your thing. <3

[jujuberry136]

I really liked this, it was sweet, funny, and hot :D

[darkhawkhealer]

Yay! Thank you!

[mcgarrygirl78]

I really enjoyed this. The whole team was awesome though I felt sorry for Derek having to be sober and it made me smile that Hotch smiled. Reid and Kevin talking about Death Stars and Imperial Falcons while Garcia worked the room was just fabulous. And of course Emily and JJ and the mistletoe. I've had that experience and its quite lovely and reading this story took me back to fun moments of abandon with someone you're really attracted to. Awesome : )

Oh and "See, I couldn't even properly enjoy that. This sucks." made me laugh out loud.

[darkhawkhealer]

*gigglefits* Yeah, poor Morgan. He never gets to do nothin fun. =P

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for the review!

[mingsmommy]

This was wonderfully written. Nice pacing, great characterization, beautiful descriptions.

[darkhawkhealer]

Thanks!

[shinealightonme]

This isn't my pairing but I really enjoyed it! Very sweet and it had me giggling to myself throughout. There are just too many great lines to quote. The scene at the party was my favorite, though I also really liked their last conversation, how JJ's so fierce, she's not going to let the Ambassador scare her off =D

[darkhawkhealer]

Yay! The party scene was fun to write -- I'm glad that came through. Thank you for the review!