Welcome (To The Jungle), for albydarned, Morgan/Reid, NC-17

[cmexchangemods]

Title: Welcome (To The Jungle)
Recipient: albydarned
Author: aoibhe
Pairing: Morgan/Reid
Rating: FRAO/NC-17
Word Count: ~1500
Warnings/Spoilers: This fic is not for everyone. Please highlight between the asterisks if you want further info. * Drug usage, sexual discipline, toys, brief mention of underage sex.* No spoilers.
Summary: If you want it you're gonna bleed

Comments

[severity_softly]

How wrong is it that I thought this was totally hot? LOL The spanking, and the rimming, and the cock gagging (the last of which is usually too unsub in this fandom for me, but it works here, because Reid is totally out of his head and Morgan is definitely not really Morgan... and as long as I'm going there, this would have been a fantastic fic for a little watersports, but I realize that's my own sickness speaking. >.> *griiiiiins*).

A little strange because Morgan is not Morgan, but the ending is perfect and makes the whole thing work. Well written and disturbingly hot. Thank you!

[severity_softly]

I'm not actually opposed to watersports and would've loved to have added it (WUH!), probably because I'm a horrid person, but I was worried about cramming too much kink into one fic (so worried, in fact, I removed the breathplay from the end, heh).

Thank you for your comment!

[severity_softly]

*G* Breathplay is one I can live without, actually, in spite of having written it a few times myself. :P

would've loved to have added it (WUH!)

You clearly just need to write more drugged up Reid kink fic then. ;)

[albydarned]

You clearly just need to write more drugged up Reid kink fic then. ;)

WHAT SHE SAID.

[aaskie]

This is awesome. It's amazing how well this one turned out despite having a lot of things I avoid in a fic. :P

Very well written.

[aaskie]

Thank you for giving it a chance despite it not being your normal cuppa! =)

[mcgarrygirl78]

Jesus. OK, let me get myself together. First, I rarely read CM slash. This story was also filled with a lot of my squicks. None of that mattered.....I kept reading and OMG, it was utterly wow. Dirty, smutty, desperate, holy moly, I cannot find enough adjectives to describe it. This is going in my memories. *fans self repeatedly*

[mcgarrygirl78]

I'm thrilled you gave this story a chance despite it hitting your squicks -- that's such high praise. Thank you so much! =)

[albydarned]

OMG. GAH. ZUH. Okay, so, the entire time I was reading this, I was thinking up ways to say that this is an entirely new perspective of Morgan that fandom writers don't pursue, the idea that he could or would become really violent in regards to same-sex relations after what happened between him and Carl. Seriously, I was going to go there ... and then BAM. It's REID, who paid some guy to torture him, to tease him and take him to the brink. And the whole time he convinces himself that it's Morgan, handing out the punishment that he thinks he deserves.

Oh man. This was awesome. I was joking with some people while ago that I was probably the worst person to get a prompt for, because everyone else wanted lighthearted, holiday fics, and I was like, DEATH. DESTRUCTION. DOOM. (LOL, what a holiday spirit I have!) So, firstly, thank you for being a good sport with this even though it wasn't exactly what you might have intended on writing when you took this challenge. You did so fantastically

[albydarned]

Okay, after re-reading (and memming the hell out of this story), there's a few more things I forgot to mention. Dude, rimming? That is SUCH a kink of mine, you have no idea. Hell, you pretty much nailed all of my kinks with this story, including the under-aged stuff in the locker rooms. You didn't give away a lot of detail about that, except that those memories are fueling Reid's desire to have this done to him, repeatedly.

So why does he choose "Morgan" for this? Maybe because Morgan reminds him so much of those guys who used to use him. Maybe because Morgan understands what it's like to be forced to do something that you don't want to do. Maybe because he looks up to Morgan, and wants him desperately. Either way, this story was both really freaking descriptive (and hot, did I mention how hot this was?) as well as vague enough with the backstory to let the reader come to their own conclusions about how Reid got to this place. GALDKFAJDSFAFASDF!!! I'm going to rec the hell out of this right now!!!

[albydarned]

I have my own thoughts on why Morgan, why and how Reid is where and what he is, and why his drug issues, but I wanted you to read this with your interpretations, if only to make it more enjoyable for you.

Your feedback is amazing and I'm beyond thrilled with the conclusions you drew! =)

[albydarned]

You may have had very different prompts from the rest of the members, but it was challenging, which I liked, and it was such a joy and a privilege to write for you. I'm so glad you liked your story!

[nebula99]

Blimey - that was dark and sad and very good.

[nebula99]

Thank you! =)