Baby my heart beats for you (if it could) (3/?)

Dec 23, 2009 09:28


Title: Baby my heart beats for you (if it could) (3/5)
Characters: SHINee, Jaejoong, Nickhun if you squint
Previous Chapters: (1)  ( (2) )

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clubotaku January 3 2010, 17:44:04 UTC
LOL, thanks. I've just updated! Thanks for commenting ^^

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saikocchi January 1 2010, 21:06:56 UTC
what he/she said up there lol

2yearsapart somehow took the thoughts from my head and formed it into words i can say that are similar to what i think of your fic lol so yeah :D

ur amazing X3

♥♥♥

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clubotaku January 3 2010, 17:47:25 UTC
To saikocchi, thanks for commenting <3 All these positive comments keep me writing :) Glad you're (both) enjoying it.

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xxqod December 23 2009, 09:37:39 UTC
OMFG ROFL ROFL LMAO!
*Whatever he does, it's Onew Sangtae!~*

I wanted to comment first, but then I had to help my mum for 2 hours, and then I continued reading and after 5 minutes I had to eat '^^
*pouts*

Jinki is so funny with his lyrics and sangtae XD
and how he snuggles Kibum when they fall down XD
sneaky Minho in the beginning, actually called an alien XD
and I think Jjong was there too (not sure)

scary zombies XD
I'm really excited for the next part! :D
Merry Christmas!~
<3 ~~

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clubotaku January 3 2010, 17:48:28 UTC
LOL, that's ok, go help/eat. Merry belated Christmas and a Happy New Year. Updated! :DDD

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cracknut23 December 23 2009, 14:05:50 UTC
Poor Jinki being bullied by Kibum! D:
But Jinki is still the optimistic sangtae-ful Jinki so :D
Kibum in your fic is as close as the Kibum in real life (so is Jinki) and its awesome that the characters in the story are very much similar to the ones in reality.
I feel kinda bad for Kibum (apart from being all kickass, diva-like and aggressive etc.) because of what he went through in the story and I hope that in the future Jinki can be fully there to support him emotionally though both are still having an okay friendship now.
Jinki's sangtae = epic.
AND JAEJOONG IS ALIVE YAY. 8D

and is that Sunway Pyramid?

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clubotaku January 3 2010, 17:50:22 UTC
Well you know, I try to portray an accurate reflection of real life XD God I love Jaejoong, that man..is just..so pretty. If a FF live-action movie was ever made he should be cast as Cloud. :D I couldn't kill him off in this...Killing Jaebum made me sad :( But it had to happen! :D
And yes, hahaha.

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lily_ina December 23 2009, 16:32:20 UTC
Oh my! I loved that! I just read the 3 chapters of this fic and I was so into it that my mother had to ask me what I wanted to eat for lunch 5 times before I actually answered! (If you call 'Hmm' an answer of course.)

I would quote things and comment more about how I loved this or that but it would take too long so I'm just going to say I love the whole story! (which is true!)

Thank you for sharing!!

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clubotaku January 3 2010, 17:51:32 UTC
I do that all the time, usually mumble something incoherent or give some sound of agreement. I don't mind you quoting ^^ New chapter up; happy to share when people tell me they enjoy it!

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