Build God, Then We'll Talk

[club_hypnotic]

Build God, Then We'll Talk
Yoochun, Jaejoong, T.O.P., Hyunjoong
R
Kleptomaniacs anonymous, and if they hadn’t made it big.
F4 fic. Marijuana use. For tvxqfic, prompt “a love story in reverse.”

Comments

[xiahness]

awww. i thought that was really sweet, for some reason. XD
the way their friendship progressed backwards, and the dreams they all had, it all felt so real and their emotions were so...real, too. haha i kind of liked the drug inclusion in this story. XD and about the story's true message, although i actually didn't see it when i was reading it, i could see it now. :) it seemed to me as if they all had the same dream, but somehow, along the way of the competition of it all, they kind of lost it and gained friendship, instead? i don't know if that really makes sense, haha. XD in the end, they all pretty much had a slice of their dreams coming true, i think. :] does that even make sense? XD

this one-shot was great! can't wait to see more writing from you! :D

[club_hypnotic]

aw shucks, you. .///. you make sense just fine lol; the story was complicated so i'm just happy you read through it. i'm also curious as to what you originally thought the story's message was (if there even was one)?

thank you so much!

[xiahness]

lol. why thank you! :D and yes, the story was complicated, but a very good complicated read! XD i originally thought that the message was just about looking for something that has already been there in the first place^^ like...looking for something you thought you want but what you really want is really right in front of you, lol. i was way off i believe. XD

you are very welcome! you are always coming up with new things in your writing; i love it! keep up with the unique writing~ ;D<3 XD

[club_hypnotic]

i was kind of worried about the messy storyline, especially since things usually turn out better in my head than when i write it out. oooh, what you read from it makes more sense than mine lol. /fail. hopefully, this uniqueness doesn't turn into batshit insane later.

♥

[hardlychosen]

Psh~! I'm not familiar with Hyunjoong's character/personality, but I absolutely positively 150% LOVED this fic!!!

I feel like you did get your point across and it was truly something unique! I enjoyed it oh so very much! I thank you immensely for sharing and I just absolutely love this one to death!!! Great job!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!!!

[club_hypnotic]

so many exclamation points. i am excite! i was worried this fic was going to be a complete flop (well...in certain aspects, it is), but i'm glad you didn't think it was. thank you so much.

[l4st_w0rds]

Ackshully. I don't know Seunghyun or HyunJoong that well either, but I think you did a spectacular job with this!!

I don't know if the fact that everything seemed backwards helped anyone realize that this was a fic about loving yourself....At least, it seemed like everything moved backwards to me. Their first meeting at the end, and the moral of the story at the beginning. WHICH, I have to say, was QUITE ingenious.

Ackshully, I think I'm really in love with this, now that I write out what I'm thinking. LMAO. Does any of that make sense?

And I really love the tone of the story. It was just....perfection.
So, I'm on my way to adding this to my memories....:D
Thanks for sharing this, bb! It was excellent

[l4st_w0rds]

And IDK where you got it, but Seunghyun's nickname?! Da shizz. Loved it.

[club_hypnotic]

hyunjoong still remains a bit of a mystery to be quite honest. but someday, i will figure him out. the story itself is indeed told backwards because the prompt was 'a love story in reverse'. uhm, if you read the bolded parts really closely, it'll also be obvious. i'm quite flattered you think i'm that smart. 'cos really, i'm not lol. thank you so much.

p.s. idk, i call top 'tabi' for a reason i've yet to discover. i think it might've turned some people off 'cos they were like 'wtf is tabi!?' but uh, yea.

[koats]

This really was a pleasure to read, especially because it involves the F4 and especially because I don't even write and I envy your characterisation. Srsly. :O

I heard TOP's nickname is also Tabi because it sounds like "TOP" in Korean or something, I read that somewhere. LOL he is like a great big pussy cat though rofl.

[club_hypnotic]

i know my characterizations are not spot-on, but it's reassuring to know someone thinks it's good enough to envy. thank you for reading.

p.s. lol so i wasn't making up shit in my head like i thought.

[nepherefirefly]

I really enjoyed reading this!
to be honest, i have no idea who hyunjoong is... Jaejoong and yoochun i know fairly well, but Tabi is my bias <3 so i know him best. lots of BB fans call him Tabi. It's one of his nicknames. I usually refer to him as Tempo, which was his stage name when he was still underground.

loved the whole Kleptomaniacs Anonymous thing. I know a few people who should join... And the whole "waving and talking about world peace in a milk carton" and recycleable packaging for yhe earth, i was like "what on earth is this?!?!" but it was really cool. I loved the point you were making with it, too. very nice.

all in all, I loved it! Thanks for sharing!!!!!

[club_hypnotic]

i couldn't remember if it was actually a nickname ('cos i kept thinking tempo and bingu were the only ones he had) or if i made it up. since it was three in the morning, i thought i made it up. /fail. loooool are these prospective members of KA other celebrities?

oh. er. they were high when they were talking about that 'cos of the joint and stuff. /insert awkward silence here. yea, okay lol. thank you for reading.