This was such a... delicate? read. :D The language used, the imagery, just. mm. all of it was so, so soft. I really enjoyed your writing style in this piece. ♥♥
Okay, I just have to point out lines that just made me ridiculously happy:
Junsu looks up to see himself in someone else standing in the doorway and the highways built across his knuckles explode; bombs, flying car parts, finding out if God really loves you.
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They’re creating romance, Junsu thinks (after all, love makes the world go ‘round). Soon enough, everybody is kissing everybody, holding hands with everybody in a circle; looking alive.
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Yoochun’s the one who holds out a hand to Junsu as he bursts into tears in the middle of a smile and winks. Sips his mocha. Numbers his days, wishes, coffee breaks like this. Casually steals some hearts. Speaks.
“Baby, you’ll be famous.”
Um. YOOSU. I-I'm just such a sucker for those two. ♥
aww...delicate. :D that's such a cute thing to say. and yea, i just noticed my yoosu bias kind of totally slipped through at the end (not that i totally turned a blind eye to it).
initially i was confused but i think this is a little similar to Time Traveller's wife. It's quite good actually.^^
There are a few quotes i really like. (:
“Wanna go bend these people out of shape?” Jaejoong asks after a moment. To make a point, he shifts a school girl closer to the boy she’s walking with. Hesitantly Junsu nods and chases after Jaejoong, who’s already at the end of the street, creating chaos in his wake.
“Birginia?”
“You’re not the idiot who just stopped time, are you?”
“No, but you’re gigantic,” Junsu blurts out.
“And your face is crooked,” the boy snaps back, crossing his arms and glaring.
confused? by part one (because that one has a lot of metaphors)? haha, but doesn't the time traveller's wife have the guy going back and forth between different time periods?
yeah, because i did not watch the one you were referring to ): i guess, i'm confused by the abrupt change in everything, like how he is when time suddenly moves again.
baby baby it's as if magic and i'm hooked <3 this shouldn't make senses but i like the casual read where the words aren't just words. ohmysu i don't know other than i really liked reading this especially for today. and my yoosu, jaesu and minsu hearts are roarring quite giddily.
♪baby baby baby (the snsd song!) anywaaaays, your comment makes total sense actually. like...words that were picked not just to sound pretty, right? /snuggles your yoosu,jaesu,minsu hearts.
the conception is just wow. i was fascinated by the very first line *_* oh, i-can-stop-the-time!junsu and the others meeting him in such a different ways %) and your word combinations~ ♥♥♥ my delighted brain tells you "ilusfm"! =D
“Wanna go bend these people out of shape?” <--- this made me love jae even more♥ xDD
the first line took me forever to think of so i'm uber-happy that you were reeled in by it. more like time stops junsu but lol jaejae ish always special. ilusfm2! :D?
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This was such a... delicate? read. :D The language used, the imagery, just. mm. all of it was so, so soft. I really enjoyed your writing style in this piece. ♥♥
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Junsu looks up to see himself in someone else standing in the doorway and the highways built across his knuckles explode; bombs, flying car parts, finding out if God really loves you.
&
They’re creating romance, Junsu thinks (after all, love makes the world go ‘round). Soon enough, everybody is kissing everybody, holding hands with everybody in a circle; looking alive.
&
Yoochun’s the one who holds out a hand to Junsu as he bursts into tears in the middle of a smile and winks. Sips his mocha. Numbers his days, wishes, coffee breaks like this. Casually steals some hearts. Speaks.
“Baby, you’ll be famous.”
Um. YOOSU. I-I'm just such a sucker for those two. ♥
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and yea, i just noticed my yoosu bias kind of totally slipped through at the end (not that i totally turned a blind eye to it).
thank you so much!
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There are a few quotes i really like. (:
“Wanna go bend these people out of shape?” Jaejoong asks after a moment. To make a point, he shifts a school girl closer to the boy she’s walking with. Hesitantly Junsu nods and chases after Jaejoong, who’s already at the end of the street, creating chaos in his wake.
“Birginia?”
“You’re not the idiot who just stopped time, are you?”
“No, but you’re gigantic,” Junsu blurts out.
“And your face is crooked,” the boy snaps back, crossing his arms and glaring.
Oh, i love Hallelujah too (:
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haha, but doesn't the time traveller's wife have the guy going back and forth between different time periods?
hallelujah is one of my favorite song. :D
thank you so much for reading.
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i guess, i'm confused by the abrupt change in everything, like how he is when time suddenly moves again.
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it's as if magic and i'm hooked <3
this shouldn't make senses but i like the casual read where the words aren't just words. ohmysu i don't know other than i really liked reading this especially for today.
and my yoosu, jaesu and minsu hearts are roarring quite giddily.
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anywaaaays, your comment makes total sense actually. like...words that were picked not just to sound pretty, right?
/snuggles your yoosu,jaesu,minsu hearts.
thank you so much!
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oh, i-can-stop-the-time!junsu and the others meeting him in such a different ways %) and your word combinations~ ♥♥♥ my delighted brain tells you "ilusfm"! =D
“Wanna go bend these people out of shape?” <--- this made me love jae even more♥ xDD
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jaejae ish always special. ilusfm2! :D?
thank you so much.
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