Oct 25, 2004 16:42
hey...yea...sry i havent updated in a while....i sound like i'm like....updating a profile...or a fanart thing...well anyways...i've been punished so...yea..i couldnt get on....well...i entered into a poetry contest with this poem....
They toy with our emotions and don't even care
They say they love us,but aren't really there.
Guys throw 'I love you' around like it's nothing
They don't know how much joy it brings to our hearts.
Most guys give you candy, Some give you flowers,
Others take you somewhere special,but the remainder don't do anything.
What's the point in loving them,if all they're going to do is break our hearts
Some are friendly,Some are nice,Others just make you feel like you want to die.
But the question is...Do they really love us?
Or do they just say they love us to make us happy?
The answer,I'd say, is they just say it to make us happy.
If they really meant it..then why'd they break our hearts?
They don't care about our feelings, They only care for their own.
Sometimes we cut our wrists to show how much pain they've caused us...
But they'll never know how much they have caused because they dont care anymore about us...They've damaged the two things that can never be fixed...
Our hearts and our minds....Our hearts because they broke them when they dumped us...Our minds because well...They made us give up on hope and made our minds messed up...
Guys give a dozen roses to show their affections....but i leave with this question....Do they really love us?
please comment and let me know what you think of it...PLEASE?!?!?! lol anyways...ill have more poems on here if you like them!! ^^ my friend was amazed on how deep the poem was....but hey...you'd get into writing deep poems too if you were just dumped or rejected by some guy you've liked for a while....anyways...ill leave this decision up to you if i should write more or not....
x0x Britty x0x