On Titles
So, for this new story, I'm thinking of calling it either:
"Leaving Remediation Village" - shows some of the emotion, but doesn't have some of the details that would work as a pull (Inner Mongolia! Desertification!).
or
"Probationary Remediation Village FR-245, Inner Mongolia Desertification Prefecture" - which would be awesome, but is too long. Perhaps I could shorten it? What rearrangement of these bits do you think would work best?
"Leaving Remediation Village" - shows some of the emotion, but doesn't have some of the details that would work as a pull (Inner Mongolia! Desertification!).
or
"Probationary Remediation Village FR-245, Inner Mongolia Desertification Prefecture" - which would be awesome, but is too long. Perhaps I could shorten it? What rearrangement of these bits do you think would work best?