08/04/2009-08/05/2009 - Tuesday & Wednesday. Recovering from knee surgery.
"Missing You In Pieces" Writing Log
New words: 348
Total words: 1,165
Overused word: laugh/laughed
Gratuitous word: chatter
Type of scene: Making a date with a serial killer.
Challenge(s): Figuring out how to keep reader engagement in the sections that are just a woman getting into a relationship--esp. since it's not from her POV.
Which line is it anyways?"Believe me, it's difficult to kidnap a woman in broad daylight in front of everyone!"
Notes: Never realized how much of a romance's readability depended on the female POV being fairly tight and sympathetic and showing emotional involvement.
Other writingy stuff:
*Patricia C. Wrede's excellent and comprehensive discussion of questions to possibly consider when fantasy world-building:
http://www.sfwa.org/2009/08/fantasy-worldbuilding-questions/*
Penthius freewriting inspired by the above.
* Posted link to MinnSpec and approved pending members.
* Posted writing log and updated previous writing log.