Go Forth and Read!
Allegory is up, and you can go read "Blood for Oil" over there right now! So why don't you go and do that and then come back and report here? I'd love to know what you think of it.
Of course, now that it's up and too late to change, I suddenly start noticing awkward transitions, a cliched word choice, a moment when the tone slips...such are the perils of being a perfectionist!
Of course, now that it's up and too late to change, I suddenly start noticing awkward transitions, a cliched word choice, a moment when the tone slips...such are the perils of being a perfectionist!