Renga- Sappy Oceans

Feb 12, 2008 15:10

each stanza is from a different classmate :)

Sunlight shimmering

Glancing off deep blue water,

Cool breeze floating by

I go for a swim

The waves breaking on my back

till night approaches

The stars appear now

Moonlight piercing through the cloud

I watch the day fade

It is day to day

New start to begin

The sun is bright

Too bright hurting eyes

Colored dots ahead of me

I can't find my friend

I hope she is there,

Waiting for me somewhere near,

Pain, my deepest fear.

Am I without her

Not just here in this cool place

But in all of life

Ocean's mystery

If she will return to me

on another day

Wait for a lifetime.

Just to see your face, need her,

something missing, empty

Bottle up old love,

forget the despondency

throw it out to sea

original: poetry

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