Getting in touch with my more artisic side....

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And trust me it wasn't easy to find, lol. Anyways this is a song I wrote over the course of a little while, so let me know honestly what you think, if it sucks, tell me, I want to know! :-P.

"Fall From Grace"

I risked it all,
But didn't win.
I was made of steel,
But turned to tin.
I tried to help,
But did I go too far?

I thought I knew
Just what to do,
But now my brain is stuck like glue.
I thought I got it all was in tune,
But I'm just howlin at the moon.

I thought I was right,
But I was wrong.
I swore I fit in,
But I sure don't belong.
Thought I won the day,
And thought I kept the pace,
Looks like I've fallen from grace.

Empty smiles and broken truths,
Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose.
Amongst a cloud of broken dreams
Humanity sucks! Or so it seems.

What goes up, must come down.
Those who smile will surely frown.
Set up so high just to fall
What the fucks the point of it all?

I thought I was right,
But I was wrong.
I swore I fit in,
But I sure don't belong.
Thought I knew the answers.
And I thought I closed the case.
Looks like I've fallen from grace.

Well there it is. It's still kinda a work in progress, please let me know what you think, and again, BE HONEST!