Comments | clockwork_jo: Fic: My heart's racing, and I'm not used to that being a good thing {Firefly-- Simon/Kaylee}

clockwork_jo

Fic: My heart's racing, and I'm not used to that being a good thing {Firefly-- Simon/Kaylee}

Oct 24, 2009 15:31

Title: My heart's racing, and I'm not used to that being a good thing
Fandom: Firefly
Characters/Pairings: Simon/Kaylee, a little bit of River
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: Nah, not really. It's set somewhere near the beginning of the series. So erm, awkward Simon? Do we need warning for that?
Word Count: A little bit less that 1400
Summary: She’s ( Read more... )

character: river tam, character: simon tam, tv: firefly, character: kaylee frye, fanfiction

Comments 6

zombie_boogie October 29 2009, 05:03:31 UTC

Awww, lovely. Everyone was really in character! The only quibbles I have were the few typos here and there. Other than that, it was a nice little one shot!

clockwork_jo October 29 2009, 10:51:56 UTC

Awwwww. Thank you. I'm glad you thought they were in character. And thank you for pointing out my typos, I'll definitely edit. ^_^

anonymous July 12 2010, 04:46:01 UTC

Hey, good job! I really enjoyed it. I like how you never told us what to feel, but the emotions carry the story along anyway. I really felt it. Nice work. :)

clockwork_jo July 12 2010, 17:57:42 UTC

THANK YOU!

ladymercury_10 December 9 2010, 01:03:12 UTC

Hey! I'm a fellow Firefly fan who stumbled across your journal.

Very sweet. I love Simon and Kaylee together, and Simon getting to be the doctor is extra nice. :)

exbex October 29 2011, 22:47:14 UTC

I love the language in this story; I feel like I'm right in Simon's head; interesting but not necessarily easy or settling.