Comments | clickysmut: Up in the Air

avsno26rocks in clickysmut

Up in the Air - Part 2

Aug 30, 2011 13:39

Title: Up in the Air
Pairing: Harry/Katie
Rating/Warnings: NC17 - Mild Profanity, Intense Sexual Situations, Oral Sex

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Comments 7

jhestia85 August 30 2011, 20:25:49 UTC

Thank you for this early Christmas present.

avsno26rocks August 30 2011, 20:36:26 UTC

Hehe, I've never written something like this from a guy's POV. I'm happy you like it, O Purveyor of Clickysmut!

equinoxchick August 31 2011, 06:22:24 UTC

I thought there was going to be broomstick sex. Kinda like the Mile High Club - ha ha.

Very good.

avsno26rocks August 31 2011, 06:46:43 UTC

The logistics of that are mind-blowing. O.O

equinoxchick August 31 2011, 07:17:46 UTC

I'm sure you're up to the challenge

gmariam September 1 2011, 01:09:17 UTC

I agree. WRITE SOME.

gmariam September 1 2011, 01:16:01 UTC

Besides the lovely smut, I have two other comments.

1- I love your angsty, tortured postwar Harry. I just absolutely heart how you make him an emotional wreck because OF COURSE HE WAS! It could not have possibly been sunshine and roses after what he went through, and I heart reading that from you. And it makes me want to comfort him. *snicker*
2 - I envy your ability to own characters like Katie. I can't write those minor characters because they just don't jump off the pages of the book for me. They are empty, blank, but you fill their characters oh-so-well.

And of course, the smut was hot. I admit I skimmed the plot to just get to the dirtiest thing you said you've ever written and it did not disappoint. Brilliant. :)