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Author Commentary: Five Things: Jess Edition

Jul 15, 2007 23:16

tigriswolf wanted me to expand on my Jess, more specifically her edition of my Five Things. My commentary will be in purple.

Title: Five Things: Jess Edition
Rating: R

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fic rating: r, fic: supernatural: pdo, fic pairing: sam/dean, fic: supernatural, puppy's day out, fic, fic genre: het, fic genre: wincest, fic: commentary, fic pairing: sam/jess

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girlfan1979 July 16 2007, 10:00:26 UTC

Okay, I could have quoted the whole thing. I really could have. But, I restrained myself to just a few bits.

The opening to this, that first line, is supposed to be in Jess's voice. A very, "but wait! There's more!" kind of thing. I don't think it worked too well.

Worked great.

She doesn't realize he isn't lying. He doesn't like the music but it makes him think of John and Dean and as independent as he is and wants to be he still misses them like all hell sometimes.

Awww. I really love that one.

And Sam screams along with Johnny Cash because what he does can't be called signing by any stretch of the imagination.

ROTLMAO

Yeah. This one sucks a lot and no one really got it.

I totally got it! I have a list of tshirts that I want to make. I think I'm up to like 35 different slogans.

Also, it's made of funny.

Yeah, she likes sex. A lot. She was completely shell-shocked when on the end of her first date with Sam he kissed her cheek and walked away. Jess is, much like Dean, all about the sex.Oh, I love it! I can just see ( ... )

clex_monkie89 July 16 2007, 10:18:02 UTC

Worked great.

Oh, yay! I was always so worried because I hear her voice while typing it but I wasn't sure it was strong enougbh to carry through.

Awww. I really love that one.

On day I'm gonna do the ultimate songfic. All the songs Sam listened to at Stanford when he missed Dean and all the ones for when he missed John and all the ones now for when he misses Jess. Eventually.

I totally got it! I have a list of tshirts that I want to make. I think I'm up to like 35 different slogans.

Yay again! Like, three different people asked me what was up with that one, which is why I was so sure I fucked it up. I'm glad you liked it!

Oh, I love it! I can just see the oblivious look on Sam's face and the WTF? look on Jess'.It was priceless. Jess walked back into the apartment she hsared with Evan and he looked up and said, "What are you doing back? It's not noon." And she's just all O.O "...He walked me to the door and kissed me. On the cheek. And then walked away." which of course makes Evan come back with, "He's gay. You should send him my ( ... )

girlfan1979 July 16 2007, 10:20:56 UTC

It was priceless. Jess walked back into the apartment she hsared with Evan and he looked up and said, "What are you doing back? It's not noon." And she's just all O.O "...He walked me to the door and kissed me. On the cheek. And then walked away." which of course makes Evan come back with, "He's gay. You should send him my way. I'll let you watch if you're nice."

Awww! LOL.

You should def. include some Evan in your Jess fics!

clex_monkie89 July 16 2007, 10:43:06 UTC

You should def. include some Evan in your Jess fics!

I find it virtually impossible to write her without him in there somewhere. They've been friends forever and lived together until she and Sam moved in.

Hell, he makes a small appearance in my Big Bang even! He's the Evan that tells Sam about the Saturn Cafe without mentioning it being a vegetarian place.

girlfan1979 July 16 2007, 10:48:38 UTC

I have not gotten to read your BB piece yet :(

I'm working on my thesis, so I'm saving big pieces for later.

clex_monkie89 July 16 2007, 11:00:24 UTC

Aw. Schoolwork, bleh. He's just a bit piece in it but I had to include him.

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