Comments | clex_monkie89: [Fic] (Supernatural) The Road Less Traveled (The Happiness Unraveled Remix)

clex_monkie89

[Fic] (Supernatural) The Road Less Traveled (The Happiness Unraveled Remix)

Apr 29, 2007 11:44

Man, I totally blew it on this one. It is definitely nowhere near as good as I could have done.

Title: The Road Less Traveled (The Happiness Unraveled Remix)
Summary: "Sam,you spent your entire life slugging it out with that man. I mean, hell,you, you picked a fight with him the last time you ever saw him."
Rating: PG-13

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fandom:, fic: supernatural, supernatural, fic genre: gen, remix, fic, fic pairing: none, fic rating: pg-13

Comments 10

embroiderama April 29 2007, 19:34:45 UTC

Well, I don't think you blew it! Thank you so much for remixing my little drabble into a whole picture of Sam right then. This line especially gets me:

Sam has five channels and a pair of pliers to flip between them.

That's just so broken and perfect.

clex_monkie89 April 29 2007, 19:46:53 UTC

I am so glad that you like it! As long as you like it that's all that matters!

dyinganthem April 30 2007, 03:44:35 UTC

Man, you totally just made me want to go hug Sammy. *sniffs*

clex_monkie89 April 30 2007, 03:55:54 UTC

Aw, I'm sorry!

dyinganthem April 30 2007, 04:01:53 UTC

But that's a good thing! 'Cause this was really well done! Awesome and so much emotion and gah, I don't know what else. ;)

clex_monkie89 April 30 2007, 04:31:11 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked this!

iamstealthyone May 1 2007, 04:13:08 UTC

Nicely done. Poor Sam, grieving and weary and needing more than Dean can give right now.

Favorite lines:

Sam was so angry with himself; so frustrated and disappointed that he could feel his hands throbbing at his sides and his pulse pounding in his head. He stomach churned and rolled to the point of nausea, and he felt sick in more ways than one.

Oh, Sam.

All that mattered was that he still had Dean. With Dean by his side he could do anything. If Dean was there everything would be alright.

Love this, because it really is that simple for both of them, I think. With each other, they’re complete, and they can keep going.

He woke up in a cold sweat and sobbed for what felt like hours because he couldn't remember whether it was Dad who had died or Dean.

This hurts. I just ache for poor Sam here. *hugs him*

clex_monkie89 May 1 2007, 04:31:03 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! I was really unsure about this one and I feel much better knowing that it really came across the way I wanted it to.

a_phoenixdragon June 24 2007, 08:41:10 UTC

This...

...was beautiful...

*Sob*

*Clings*

*Adores*

*HUGS you*

clex_monkie89 June 24 2007, 09:06:53 UTC

*Hugs you back* Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this!