Seeking - fic for midnight_birth

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Author: gelsey
Recipient: midnight_birth
Title: Seeking
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers/Warnings: Wall!sex, rough sex, language
Characters/Ships: Charlie Weasley/Cho Chang
Genre: PWP with a hint of plot
Summary: It all started with the Ministry. But then, most things in Charlie Weasley’s life could be traced back to that establishment.
Length: 1,560
Notes: I hope this works

Comments

[midnight_birth]

Oh, dear author, I absolutely adored this! I couldn't think of many pairings when making my request, and definitely made this one in the blind, unsure of whether these two would actually work together, but oh, you made them work! And how!

I love Charlie in this. You wrote him exactly how I love him. Confident, cocky, charming in an arrogant sort of way. xD There is a reason I love his character, and you've managed to highlight all of them and gave me a few more to boot. I love that he couldn't stand to lose (even if he told himself that wasn't the reason), and sweeping her off her broom and putting her down is such a Charlie thing to do. Suave even when being a jerk, very him. ;)

Cho was very different in this than people usually portray her - tougher somehow, slier, and I really liked this. I liked how you filled out her character and made it multidimensional (something the book failed to do) and with a little attitude, too. She was a perfect match for Charlie, and I loved how she teased him: he definitely deserved it! xD

The sex was awesome. You really hit up on my biggest kink there, for which I am very excited. The roughness, the passion, the "I gotta have you now" kind of interaction was incredibly hot. I also loved the Quidditch references in their sexual dance, and how it kept jumping from tender to rough.

My favourite part, I have to admit, is that you managed to put so much meaning and feeling into their interaction, which at first seems to be simply a lust thing. The way Charlie gently kisses her at the end, the way she tries to pull away... I have to admit it was like a hit in the stomach when he realized why she preferred to hit him and be angry at him rather than let him in on a more personal level. That was very in character and heart-breaking.

Thank you so much for this amazing gift, dear author. I really love it!! ♥

[gelsey]

I'm so very pleased that you thought they were plausible! It's a compliment I value very highly. I've always adored Charlie and I couldn't pass up the challenge of getting the two of them together.

That you liked the characters and the sex is just awesome. Your entire review has filled me with so much squee, you don't even realize :D I couldn't bring myself to leave it as purely sexual (yes, I fail at PWP sometimes). Thank you so much, for your kind comments and for your gift to me.

<3