Tonight, Tonight - fic for misanagi

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Author: captainpookey
Recipient: misanagi - hope you enjoy it!
Title: Tonight, Tonight
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers/Warnings: bad language, some violence
Characters/Ships: Michael Corner, Terry Boot, Anthony Goldstein, Blaise Zabini, etc.
Genre: Angst, adventure-ish
Summary: Terry and Anthony try to find Michael before he makes a very stupid decision, but little do they know

Comments

[misanagi]

This was very well written. I liked the connections between the scenes from the first DA and the second. It makes for a very interesting writing style. As you said there's much about the events in DH that we don't know and these characters, being so secondary, leave a lot of room for interpretation, however, this isn't the Michael that lives in my head. The story has internal coherency but because of the way I've built Michael in my head I have trouble accepting he would do something like this. This, of course, isn't anything against your writing, which was beautiful, but has more to do with how I see the character and situations that bother me.

You were well withing the parameters of my request, even if I never imagined it would be interpreted this way. This was a difficult story to read for me since I don't react well to betrayal, even more so when it's one of my favorite characters doing it but as I say, it's not a reflection on you since given what we know and the guidelines given you were well withing your rights to write it this way.

Thank you for writing my story and for exploring these characters. I can see you put work into it and I really appreciate it.