Can't help but perk up a little to read that! Thanks. Maybe I am being too hard on myself (Damn perfectionist thing when it comes to my writing stories) and the story. I do think the later chapters read better than some of the start. But I also remember this memory of how I was struggling with Sabbath, thinking he isn't coming off sympathethic enough...I just remember thinking I was messing up the story WHILE I was writing it. And couldn't figure out at the time how to fix it. Sometimes when I take a break from a story, and come back a few months or years later, it's for the good of the story, since I make better choices for the plot and characters
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What are you talking about you made Sabbath VERY sympathetic and interesting to read. The way he struggles between what he believes to be his duties and his growing attraction for the human prisoner was very realistic. In fact I also really liked how you made Lotor more in character (no offense to your other work or anything they are also very interesting reads). Hell i'm still hoping that you'll eventually pick the story back up and finish it at some point.
As for the not writing thing. Just pick up a laptop and start typing, that's what I do.
If it was that easy to form a story that is of well written quality then everyone would just pick up a laptop and write. But it's not. When you are stuck, you're stuck, and it doesn't matter if you have your fingers on the keyboard, if the words won't even form in your head, and the ones that do, dont' sound right, and don't flow naturally into the next sentence, and then the next, and the next, and so on until you have a chapter or story
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Okay I see your point.still though I really do hope you end up picking the story back up and finishing it. Not that i'm telling you to drop what you're doing right now, it's just a hope I have. Same thing goes with OSVP as that's my favorite VP fanfic you've made.
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As for the not writing thing. Just pick up a laptop and start typing, that's what I do.
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