Re: i promised this.majestic_liesMay 29 2005, 07:29:53 UTC
Mediocrity ----------------------- I will drown until morning, why are you drowning and why just till morning? this image seems very cliche in the side-street rivers what exactly would be a side street river, rivers in the actual streets? why there? When my neighbor’s slippers flop to the newspaper, she will lift the classifieds and find my teeth with acid traces, the runoff on my cheeks looking like a smile its a nice image but very confusing images with no reasoning behind them. She will pull me around her like a shawl, unwrapping my body at every door, draping me across my mother at my own before walking back to her burnt toast
My head hanging off a couch cushion mother would strike a small fire to run its way through the phone lines Paramedics follow the smoke, come and shove me into the wall
The casket rises as it falls because that someone plucking awkwardly through my room’s belongings will find these journals slid between the bed and window
you are good with odd images but seem to have no reasoning as to why these things are occuring.
Mediocrity
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I will drown until morning,
why are you drowning and why just till morning? this image seems very cliche
in the side-street rivers
what exactly would be a side street river, rivers in the actual streets? why there?
When my neighbor’s slippers flop to the newspaper,
she will lift the classifieds and find
my teeth with acid traces, the runoff on my cheeks
looking like a smile
its a nice image but very confusing images with no reasoning behind them.
She will pull me around her like a shawl,
unwrapping my body at every door,
draping me across my mother at my own
before walking back to her burnt toast
My head hanging off a couch cushion
mother would strike a small fire
to run its way through the phone lines
Paramedics follow the smoke,
come and shove me into the wall
The casket rises as it falls
because that someone plucking
awkwardly through my room’s belongings
will find these journals slid
between the bed and window
you are good with odd images but seem to have no reasoning as to why these things are occuring.
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