a good day

Jul 25, 2005 03:42

Cool breeze, warm sun grabbing and lifting My mood.
A view of the waves breaking, seaweed washing up on the sand.
Closing my eyes telling myself never to forget this moment.
The light in my soul, the pretty Senorita laying beside me.

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forgottenevil July 26 2005, 03:10:47 UTC
it made me smile
and calmed a flighty mind

:)

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anetode July 27 2005, 06:21:10 UTC
Seems to be the perfect text to write on a postcard from some paradise.

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majestic_lies August 9 2005, 05:07:32 UTC
its nice.
the last line seems a little off though.
the word senorita doesnt really seem to fit. but other than that, it is nice.

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