ESSAY POST

[cleak_cu09]

I did it on myspace, so I might as well do it here... Here's another essay for you to read... a little different style than the last one.. tell me what you think...

Comments

[park_the_car]

I really like it.

Hrm, something about the very last sentence though. I think it needs something else, short but strong, to completely taper it off -- something very "!!!" if you know what I mean.

[cleak_cu09]

it was for my Yale class and it was supposed to be short, so since the prof liked it, i left it... gotta do watch ya gotta do for the grade. lol

[park_the_car]

Haha, oh yes, I know EXACTLY what you mean.