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Into the Light - Primeval fanfic

Apr 27, 2013 11:51

Title:Into the Light
Author: Clea2011
Word Count: 3951
Characters: Becker/Connor
Rating: 15
Spoilers: No
Warnings: No
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures, I'm just writing for fun and non-profit.
A/N: For the primeval_denial Art prompt challenge. This was written for the lovely artwork by luvconnor which is on her journal here:

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becker/connor, primeval, captain becker, connor temple

Comments 37

fredbassett April 27 2013, 11:40:29 UTC

Oh dear, poor, impulsive Connor!

Great action, and I love Becker finally giving in to his feelings and kissing Connor. *g* Nice to see soldier boy getting ruffled for once.

I love the way we each did this prompt for different POVs!

fififolle April 27 2013, 12:06:01 UTC

This is so very, very Connor, and yours is so very, very Becker! It was wonderful xxx

fredbassett April 27 2013, 12:10:30 UTC

It makes me think we should definitely have a challebge where we all write for the same prompt, as the variations on a theme have been such fun. Couldn't have been better if we'd tried to coordinate it!

fififolle April 27 2013, 12:18:13 UTC

Not sure I've seen anything like that before, it could be good! You could run a poll for the prompt, like the caption competition.

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fififolle April 27 2013, 12:04:38 UTC

Eeeee! Completely bloody wonderful. I was on total tenterhooks all the way through, even now, and then their angsty cute arguing flirting yay! NOM. A cheap date, oh Connor. That line was brilliant :D Great fic! *claps*

clea2011 May 1 2013, 21:26:15 UTC

Yay! Thank you, and for the beta! :)

nietie April 27 2013, 12:16:30 UTC

Ooh, I'd go for a cheap date like that! Lucky Connor.

I loved the tension in the beginning.

Great use of the art prompt.

clea2011 May 1 2013, 21:26:36 UTC

Me too! I wouldn't object! Thanks :)

freddiejoey April 27 2013, 12:18:56 UTC

This is great fic to match that terrific graphic

clea2011 May 1 2013, 21:26:48 UTC

Thanks :)

aunteeneenah April 27 2013, 15:00:55 UTC

Oh, Connor... sigh... you just won't listen, will you. But he has the absolute best intentions when he does this sort of thing, it just doesn't seem to work out.
You'd think Becker would know by now and just take Connor with him because he should know he's not going to stay put.
Another wonderful use of the prompt. Loved the kiss but not so sure Connor will be able to keep his mouth shut. *g*

clea2011 May 1 2013, 22:03:39 UTC

Thanks - no, I think the chances of Connor keeping quiet are very, very slim :)