Poems
so here i go this will be my first entry with my poetry.....yeah well this is some stuff that i wrote for school and i think it would be a good starting point for me putting this stuff on the internet..
here we go these are the first two i'll put out and see what every one thinks...cuz im sure i have better stuff....
Personification
The bullet spoke today
Telling a tale
Of struggle
Of sorrow
Self-loathing
Self-hatred
A desire to end
What started at birth
A bullet spoke the truth
As it pierces his temple
Advice
People ask for it all the time
But you don’t know what to say
Do I tell them what they want to hear
Or what they should really know
One will make them feel good for a while
The other will break them down
But once you tell them its there choice
Do they take the advice
Or do they tread there own path
Either way you’re a key factor in the decision
But not the outcome
It could work out
Or fall on its face
Either way
It’s just advice
here we go these are the first two i'll put out and see what every one thinks...cuz im sure i have better stuff....
Personification
The bullet spoke today
Telling a tale
Of struggle
Of sorrow
Self-loathing
Self-hatred
A desire to end
What started at birth
A bullet spoke the truth
As it pierces his temple
Advice
People ask for it all the time
But you don’t know what to say
Do I tell them what they want to hear
Or what they should really know
One will make them feel good for a while
The other will break them down
But once you tell them its there choice
Do they take the advice
Or do they tread there own path
Either way you’re a key factor in the decision
But not the outcome
It could work out
Or fall on its face
Either way
It’s just advice