Title: Why Won’t You Go
Author: ClawofCat
Timing: Season 6
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Spike/Buffy
Warnings: Graphic sexual content, spanking, violence, dark themes
Summary: Set during “Gone.” What could have happened in the kitchen that morning between Buffy and Spike had Xander not walked in on them?
A/N: This was written as the prologue to an episode
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it's not what you asked for. at all. and if you don't like it or don't use it i won't be offended. but there you go.
now i'm going to read it. i'll leave real comments after that.
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that banner wasn't difficult. it was trying to do a spanking manip that was hard, and really only because i couldn't find a good base, even after looking at millions of porn sites.
but onto the important thing, your story! very nice, doll.
She made some inelegant moan in her throat and glared at him. “Shut up and keep doing it.”
i know this was in the ealier version too, but damn do i love this line. both the word inelegant and buffy's dialog. it encapsulates all of it really. she despises what he does and needs him not to stop.
Buffy picked up on the tremor of insecurity, his need for validation and her approval. But she wouldn’t give him those things, didn’t want him doting and sweet. She wanted the fire and anger, wanted him to feel it too, so she wasn’t alone in her pain.
yes! one thing i love about s6 spike is the way he's all, "well, hey. i do pain, and you do pain. let's do pain together." and then buffy's all, "ew, spike. i don't do pain with people. you're disgusting. i have to call you ( ... )
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But Spike still forgot his lighter :P
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And you know what? Who cares if I write kink? Try your hand at it. No one is judging you or comparing you. I would love to read your take on it. Don't feel intimidated by me!
I also had a really great time at dinner tonight. Thanks for the great company and discussion. You rock, my friend.
And here's an icon just for you.
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I love the way you get into the characters heads. You caught the twisted relationship between them so brilliantly.
I read that it was mentioned before, but I also found it great how natural the kinky elements came on. That's exactly the way I like them best.
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I also found it great how natural the kinky elements came on. That's exactly the way I like them best.Me too. I don't write epics. I do these one-shots that take a moment in time for these characters and then dig deep. And for some reason I like setting fics in the mundane. In houses, bedrooms, kitchens, living rooms. It's this sort of weird intersection where the unusual (say kink) converges with the domestic. That explosion, how it sort of rocks the space and the characters, is really fascinating to me ( ... )
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It's wonderful to explore the underlying emotional currents in canon and I love how caught the desperation of S6 Buffy here.
And for some reason I like setting fics in the mundane. In houses, bedrooms, kitchens, living rooms. It's this sort of weird intersection where the unusual (say kink) converges with the domestic. That explosion, how it sort of rocks the space and the characters, is really fascinating to me.
Oh yes, that's the perfect way to put it in words! It gets so much hotter when the kink doesn't seem to be planned in advance.
And I always love to chat with the author. That you can so easily do that is one of the things I like best about fanfic (I even caught myself reading books and wanting to write the author this and that in comment lately)
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I feel like that too, esp after getting into fanfic so much and chatting with authors. I read a book now and feel like giving feedback as I read it. *sigh*
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I suck with words, be forewarned.
You write them so well, I can feel her pain and self disgust and his desperation and his pain too. The kink just kinda happened almost naturally and isn't that just the best way?
You so totally rock. ^_^
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The kink just kinda happened almost naturally and isn't that just the best way?
It's certainly my favorite way. Because, usually, in my experience, that's how it is in RL. Sex doesn't come about in outlandish scenarios and I don't see why our dear heroes should have sex any differently. Just gotta keep it real, IMHO.
You so totally rock.
Woo! *rocks out* You rock, too. It's great to have such a frequent commenter like yourself. That way I get to know everyone over time, which is what makes this LJ experience really gratifying for me.
Cheers!
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“For you to start actually saying it!”
Forgot to comment about that. She kept pushing him away but she never really said no and meant it (and we all know where that ended up..)
Just about to read some of your Angel/Faith fic I found on the list up there. ;)
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