Not Yours - (Ficlet)

[clawofcat]

Title: Not Yours
Timing: Pre-Series
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Fledge!Spike/Angelus
Summary: After a brutal assault from Angelus, Dru is comforted by Spike. Daddy's not happy, at all. Spike pays the price. 
Warnings: Graphic language and sexual content. There be non-con and a bit of torture this way. If you’re squicked, turn away.

A/N: Written for

Comments

[little_dumpling]

raow! that was nice and sadistically hot. me likie.

i have really enjoyed the few pieces of yours i have read so far! it actually makes me sad this is the only A/S fic you have. i could see you doing this pairing great justice... so you have yourself a new fangirl! *wanders off to read more*

[clawofcat]

Hee hee, you know, I'm still embarassed by this piece. I was shaking in my boots to post it originally, but it seems there are plenty who like the dirtybadwrong just fine.

That's great to hear you've been enjoying my work. You're the second person this week to tell me they hoped I wrote more slash. What a compliment! I wouldn't be surprised if I wrote Spangel again in the future.

Happy reading! I should have a new Spike-centric ficlet up this weekend.

[flake_sake]

I think I already read this one a while ago on feedmykink but I was an evil soulless lurk who didn't comment back then.

It's really dark and mean and very intense. I like it a lot how Angelus is the perfect picture of evil in your story. Makes sense that he hates the connection between Spike and Dru.

[clawofcat]

lol, oh honey, I think everyone was a lurker at some point. I wouldn't be too hard on yourself =)

This ficlet marked an interesting turn in my fanfic writing. Up until this point I had been writing almost exclusively 3000-6000 word one shots. When I saw how much you can actually cram into 750 words or so, my fics started to get shorter too. I mean, I don't attach rules to these things. I write as much as the scene/story calls for - that can be 500 words or that can 3000 words - but a trend was def started as a result of this challenge. And I really ought to write evil Angelus again. He's a hoot!

[mendenbar01]

Like the garlic buds. Sabre shadowkitten has a story where they use a perforated dildo filled with holy water.

[clawofcat]

Yeah, those garlic beads, a vampire's worst nightmare. Leave it to Angelus to cook something that perverse up. I've never read any of Sabre's work since I'm not really a slash fan, but I hear that she did a lot of firsts and covered many kinky bases. The perforated dildo certainly sounds like an inventive creation.

[snogged]

Sadistic, dark, and evil

What a perfect combo!

[clawofcat]

Absolutely! This fic is quite an oldy of mine, but whenever I look back at it I adore my characterization of Angelus. I love him evil and bastardly. The way he was portrayed on the show never quite lived up to my expectations of Ultimate Evil, so it's up to us to show what a depraved psychopath he really was. *wistful sigh* I gotta write me some more Angelus.

[kikimay]

Great fic!
I love the dinamycs between Darla, Angelus, Spike and Dru. In this fic is clear that Darla and Angelus are the sadistic, sociopathic ones, while Dru and Spike are more human and sentimental.
Poor Drusilla and poor, poor Spike!

[clawofcat]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this look into the Fanged Four. It was great fun to write an evil, sadistic Angelus. In retrospect, you really have to wonder why Angel didn't have more of a protege. There was Penn, but he didn't seem to travel with them as a family unit like Dru and Spike did. Perhaps Angelus could not have abided to have any competition in his household or usurping of his authority.

[kikimay]

I think so. But also it's all about his sadistic impulses, that compels him to find always another victim and to get bored of the previous. (I'm sorry for me english!)

[clawofcat]

So true! He definitely has that need to feel power and to victimize.