Unique - Act I (iii) - Vandal

[claudiapriscus]

Act I (iii)- Vandal

Comments

[adrenalineshots]

Thats the beauty of the saw: it makes everyone portable.

Lol! So, so disturbingly true. And such a Dexter thing to say *g*

I sitting on the edge of my seat reading this! AWesome job so far!

[goldenusagi]

Though for a second I can almost see it: “Dex, are you going to fuckin' kill this guy or what? Stop dicking around, you're supposed to meet Rita at the doctor's in an hour.”

Actually, that's a disturbing idea, even for me.

HA.

[rince1wind]

You've got the voice of Dexter down SO well! Very much like that in the books. The plot, Dexter's ruminations about how Dean is key, but Sam's critical to their MO too, Rita -- I love the mixing-it-up you're doing with Supernatural.

[rince1wind]

Oh, forgot to mention above. Sam "in the throws of food poisoning" should be "throes..."

[claudiapriscus]

Ooh, crud. You're so right. Thank you.

[nong_pradu]

Oh my holy sweet JESUS this is perfect! You've got Dexter so freakin' down it's like listening to him narrating the show (I know -- that's the point -- but it sounds JUST LIKE the show!).

I really don't want this to end. lol.

[labseraph]

I love how well you got into Dexter's headspace here. His words ... gotta say pretty darn close to canon.