Small Crimes; for smut_69, NC-17

Jan 20, 2007 18:52

Written for the smut_69 challenge for prompt #55. Voyeur

Upon the request of arubyslipper who wanted Velkan and then some....

Summary: Velkan can only watch, he is never let in. Continuation on In the Company of Wolves Warning! some incestious references

Small Crimes )

smut_69, fic, van helsing

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O_o arubyslipper January 20 2007, 19:31:47 UTC
thank you! you are becoming an expert on voyerism...

and they are like blood splattered on her pale face. -i like your ever-present blood-motif. it's sort of a themetic link between all your stories and suits anna particularly well. and it always brings something more into the meaning

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Re: O_o claudia_writes January 20 2007, 19:35:51 UTC
You are most welcome!

I wanted to link all of the 3 stories together somehow. The blood thing wasn't really intentional, but it apparently works. They are all of a similar vein so I like that they link.

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Re: O_o arubyslipper January 20 2007, 20:15:18 UTC
i think that this whole velkans-poit-of-view of events works well. i love the way you show his outsidedness.

I'm watching bond: from russia with love, which seems pretty nice (on bond-scale). and there's gypsy girls fighting, and it's all wonderfully sovinistic :)

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Re: O_o claudia_writes January 20 2007, 23:12:56 UTC
I quite like the idea of not killing him off outright. I was going to do this whole two apha males thing, but that didn't really work out. .... maybe next time.

Ooh shauvinism! I gotta work up my feminism for February.

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lady_green_bat January 20 2007, 20:12:04 UTC
I liked this a lot! You should really do some more with Velkan as the representation of his character here is excellent :D

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claudia_writes January 20 2007, 23:10:49 UTC
Ah thank you. I've never really gotten into Velkan untill now. I might actually pursue this more when I get the time, he seems to be surprisingly interesting.....

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0_mile_marker January 20 2007, 20:18:04 UTC
Holy Moley.

THAT made the werewolf look normal.

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claudia_writes January 20 2007, 23:11:23 UTC
*giggles* well as normal a werewolf can be, I guess!

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