Fic: "Leave You" (Jack/Ianto) - 6/10

[clarrisani]

Title: Leave You
Author: Jedi Princess Clarrisani
Chapter: 6 of 10
Rating: R (M15+)
Pairing(s): Jack/Ianto
Series: Breathe Trilogy (Part One)
Summary: After losing his two best friends during an alien attack, Ianto quits Torchwood only to end up in a train wreck
Disclaimer: Still don't own. I'm not allowed to play in that sandbox.
Warnings: Very, very,

Comments

[mrs_cj_harkness]

Clever, I like it!

[clarrisani]

Thank you. Next chapter up.

[missthingsplace]

I'm loving this, great chapter and i hope there's more soon?

[clarrisani]

Yeap, more up... but you already know that. ;)

[appleseed_06]

Love it. can't wait to read some more

[clarrisani]

Glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter has been posted.

[lexia4]

Yet another brilliant chapter. I can't wait for more.

[clarrisani]

Thank you. Next chapter is posted - hope you enjoy it.

[lawsontl]

I'm really loving the plot and development here (and especially Owen, though I think even he might hesitate at asking if a 16-year-old was hot under the circumstances)...so this is just a tiny little nitpick...it's Wharf, not Warf :) Can't wait for more!

[clarrisani]

Ah crap. I thought I got all those typos. Good pick up. It's now been corrected. And my intention with Owen in that scene was for him to try and lighten the mood with an inappropriate comment to stir Ianto (which worked, to a degree). Sorry if it didn't quite read that way.

Glad you're liking the story though. The next chapter has been posted.