Comments | clarrisani: CSI Fic: Battlefield (4/11)

clarrisani

CSI Fic: Battlefield (4/11)

Oct 21, 2006 11:17

Title: Battlefield
Chapter: 4/11
Author: Jedi Princess Clarrisani
Beta: Stalker of Shadows
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agneson9 October 21 2006, 13:32:24 UTC

I love this story. It's very paced and slowly builds and builds.

Ibid.

clarrisani October 21 2006, 13:37:26 UTC

Thank you. Trust me, writing it slow was very, very hard. The whole time I was writing I was chanting in my mind "just kiss already!" but didn't let it happen. The scene when they were walking was the main one, and it gets worse.

So... who do you think is the killer?

agneson9 October 21 2006, 15:08:57 UTC

The Killer? I haven't met the suspects yet, so, who knows? I hope it won't be obvious!

clarrisani October 25 2006, 02:42:21 UTC

It wasn't when I was writing it. Hell, I didn't know who the killer was until the end! lol.