You ruined my shirt. -.-

May 04, 2011 23:15

Title:  You ruined my shirt. -.-
Author: Clariguard
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: 2min
Summary: Minho's being a meanie pants and drew on taemin's shirt. -.-

a/n: this is semi true cause someone drew on my shirt a few days ago. it got me all pissed off so i wrote it out, then had an idea to practice smut stuff but ended up being totally awkward and being a big ( Read more... )

oneshot, *fanfic

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undeniablysarah May 5 2011, 04:19:18 UTC
MY SPOT BYATCHES


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clariguard May 5 2011, 04:25:00 UTC
i love you umma. ^_^

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:21:10 UTC
PART 1:



Well I think this comment is actually better than the first one I wrote! XD

I am re-reading it again though just to make sure I don't leave anything out.
lol I am typing this on word... while listeing to that one Disney Original Movie Soundtrack "Lemonade Mouth" cause the song is stuck in my head... haha don't judge me.

Anyway On to the comment right??

Or maybe I should just don't finish it...what are u gonna do hmm

Oh damn good thing I am typing this on word.. my internet just froze lol...



lol its came back right as I typed that....

Honestly.... this story can be described in one GIF.

ONE GIF IS ALL I NEED

But

I will talk about the story first b4 I show u which 1 GIF it is lol

:)

From the begining:

Lots of "F-bombs" there bb~



"eraser that said Emma Watson"

HAHAHAHA Emma FUCKING Watson



Was the dead grandmother directly related to u.. or was it just in the story... I couldn't tell...

“Hey, calm the heck down, bitch.”

OMG
I love how Key tries to comfort Taemin by calling him a bitch
-sounds like someone I know-
-cough not me cough-



Hehehe I am still awesome ^_^

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:21:57 UTC
Part 2:

LOL @ Jinki being all jinki like

"It's better than eating and getting fat."

^ Probably one of my favorite lines... only one of them though lol
So Key like...
I laughed... sounds like something my mama would say
^.^

I will say though... if I read "dead grandmother" one more time I am going to go ape shit....



"I'm gonna like strip a bit"

Oh please do....

......

-in thought-



I'm cute :)

Btw..
Taeminnie in middle school... NOT ALLOWED
Makes me a pedo noona... which I AM NOT
CAUSE WE ARE THE SAME AGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-is ranting-

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:22:40 UTC
Part 3:

Anyway:

“Hey, do NOT talk about my sexuality on this bus. There's too many unattractive gays who'd try and get laid by me on here.” He said pointing a finger at me.

^ Another one of my favorite lines...

I was laughing and then...



u started having them talk about math....

MATH IS EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOT EVEN
-raging-

Ok honestly... I kinda got lost for a little bit.. All of a sudden its is just Minho yelling "YOU BITCH" and I was like...Wait what....
I though minnie was running?
Or wait.. he got off the bus...
idek

Kinda confusing transition..
Or maybe I am a dumbass who cant read idek

Anyway moving on:

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:23:34 UTC
"smirk plastered on his face"

Sexy image...


Not minho but still sexy

:)

“You make this too easy.” He said pinning my resisting hands above my head, then licking my neck as if it was candy.

“M-Minho... S-Stop it, now.”

OKEII

At this point I got MEGA confused.
Do they know each other???
Like ar ethey friends?
Lovers?
Fuck buddies
idk



He commanded
He commanded
He commanded
He commanded

He commanded

He Commanded

Command me...

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:24:08 UTC
Anyway...
After I like started to freak the flip out.. I proceeded to read...

"He sat on me to restrain my legs and held my wrists above my head [. . .]hot red wax down my body with his other hand [. . .] me whimpering as I still recovered from the wax."





Very creative... never expected it! Damn... who knew u were this big of a PERVERT

At this point I cotinued reading and once again the question was...
WHAT ARE THEY TO EACH OTHER
TaeTae was just pissed offf...
OH
Maybe... because taetae was being such a bastard to everyone about his shirt his friends called his boyfriend Minho and told him how taemin was acting... so Minho took it apon himself to teach taemin a lesson and help him get his anger out.
that makes the most sense
so... I will go with that...

I feel smart now :)

“This will hurt. Try not to scream too loud.”



"untying the bow around Taemin's neglected member"

TOTALLY MISSED THIS THE FIRST TIME I READ IT
I TOTALLY MISSED THE FACT THAT HE COULDN'T CUM
DAMN



“Let's go for another round in the shower real quick.” He said dragging me.

“Oh my gosh, you are going to be the death of me.” I said to the monster pulling on my wrist.

Good ENDING!

:)

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:24:41 UTC
Overall this stories 1 GIF is:



And i am all up for a sequal :DDDD

-hint hint...nudge-

Bai Bai bb!

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clariguard May 6 2011, 02:44:07 UTC
aw fffffffffffff, u want one too?????????????????????????

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:49:23 UTC
Yes I do bbcakes!



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clariguard May 6 2011, 02:43:37 UTC
"Damn... who knew u were this big of a PERVERT"
*raises hand* ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA I KNEW IT ALL ALONG AND YOU NEVER BELIEVED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :p <3<3<3<3<3

o, and if u ever position urself like that harry potter dude in that gif, i will kill you.

"so Minho took it apon himself" isn't it upon? ....... : /

oh and WRONG.

lol at gif..... yeaaaaa taetae wasn't allowed to cum btw.... :p yeaaaa, bad ending cause everyone wants a sequel and i could barely write the smut in this one, lolololololol ^_^ <3<3<3<3

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:48:18 UTC
Pssh I will not underestimate ur pervertedness

U will kill me? Why...
taemin doesn't mind ;)

lol.. yeah it is upon...i was distracted by looking for all those GIFS

I AM NOT WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-forever in denial-

Taetae....
not alowed to cum
poor bb!
I approve.

DO IT

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clariguard May 6 2011, 02:51:35 UTC
ahem....i'd rather not do IT since idk what IT is, but if IT is taemin or anyone form SHINee i will gladly do THEM. ^_^

yea, pervieness rly comes out to you now.... lolololol :p <3

hahahaha!!!! you are sooooooooo wrongggggggggggggggggggg. :p <3<3<3

taetae was eventually allowed to cum.... hehehehe.... it'd hurt if he couldn't. ^_^

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 02:55:06 UTC
IT refers to a squeal...

Not ur fantasies...Even if they have a "come hither" look lol



^ Jinki's "Come hither" look

Yay i have noticed how pervy u are! I am happy <3

I AM NOT WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!! U JUST WISH U THOUGHT OF IT
I will let u take credit for it ;)

Taetae cumming
I need to stop now...



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clariguard May 6 2011, 02:58:39 UTC
o!!! new gif!!! -saves- ooooooooo, jinki laughed. he remembers doing that. ^_^

HA. YOU ARE WRONGGGGGGGGGG YET AGAINNNNNNNNNNNNN.

idt i will do a sequel tho

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undeniablysarah May 6 2011, 03:02:54 UTC
Jinki u tease!

I AM NOT WRONG!

D8< MEAN

-gets comforted-

U SHOULD DO ONE :)

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