Of ghosts and Writing..
I felt I should put up a sample of something I wrote for english.
It's really sucky.
I always found it awkward when I saw ghosts. They usually had no idea that they were dead, and were irratated when everyone ignored them. Then once they found out that they were dead they either “went on” or submerged them selves deep into denial more than before. These were the usual cases anyway.
This case was…different. It was just different, made to stump me and toy with me. It was amazing how similar they are, same features -crooked smile, shoulder length black hair, and legs that spun lies about his hieght (which was actually about 5’7) - except for the eyes. Instead of a nice soft hazel they were a harsh green. It was very disconcering.
I walked silently over to the tree he stood under. The tree it’s self was going to be cut down under order Dr. Benzedryne. I didn’t completely understand why, the kids under risk of suicide weren’t even allowed out this far, but alas life goes on. The boy noticed me now and gestured for me to follow him further into the forest. I complied easily, following his stride only steps behind him. I was almost about to reach him when I heard “Patient 1031 where do you believe your going?”
Of Course Dr. Benzedryne had come to ruin my fun. Turning around, scorn written plainly on my face I faced him and said “First off I have a name, its Andrea Way, and secondly why must you ask?”
“Your One of my patients, a.k.a my responsibility”
“I’m no patient doctor, for I am not crazy. Therefore my enrollment in this facilty was under false charges.” Yes, I attened Rosewood Facilty for the Mentally Ill, or an asylum for nut so people. And I don’t belong here.
“I would call paranoid Schizophrenia a good enough reason to be here.”
“I’m not schizo no matter what you and my parents believe!”
“Tell me Andrea, are you still seeing ghosts?”
“Tell me Dr. Benzedryne, are you still an ass”
And with that last sentence I turned and followed the mysterious boy deeper into the forest, away from the Asylum, away from my problems, and away from Dr. Benzedryne.
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