[AtoRyo] - A Dance in Four Steps

Nov 29, 2006 23:40

Title: A Dance in Four Steps
Fandom: Tenipuri
Pairing: Royal Pair - Atobe Keigo x Echizen Ryoma
Genre: Humour
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,235

Step #1: Irritate

His reflection glared back distastefully when Atobe tried to smooth out the rough ends of his hair. Ever since his mop of naturally fair hair grew back into place, he found it hard for him to ( Read more... )

tenipuri, atoryo, royal pair

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 00:06:30 UTC
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Yay for the squee ;) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I hope you enjoyed it =D

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kaorismash November 29 2006, 20:46:26 UTC
fter being presented with roses for the tenth time the month after, Ryoma jokingly asked the proud boy if he was flirting with him. Atobe’s smirk following Ryoma’s question made him regret asking.

“What if I am?”

Fuck…

Yeah, that's love.

It's cute, expecially the fact that Atobe's hair couldn't seem to stay perfect, and that comment of how he looks less like a monkey. Oh, and how Shishido thought his hair was less oldman-like. *laughs* AND you made it resemble Oshitari and Tezuka's hair when he tried to style it! *Incoherent squeeling* OMG! HOW DID I MISS READING THAT THE FIRST TIME?!

Guh, is everyone turning towards Royal pair? Why am I feeling like I'm being converted as well? Noooo~ Tezuka! (Yay for Tezuka giving Ryoma his button! *Clings to TezuRyo*)

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 00:12:32 UTC
LOL! I thought I just ruined the 'roses' moment with Ryoma's profanity =) Huhu... That 'step' is the funniest to write because I keep seeing Tezuka's scandalised expression after getting the rose from Atobe! Hehe...

Feeling converted are we? *raised amused eyebrow* Well, Royal Pair snark is like... Tezuka Zone. They just pull you in. XD

Thanks for reading as usual, dearie ;)

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kaorismash November 30 2006, 02:16:25 UTC
Lol, I imagine Tezuka trying to understand why he's getting a rose in the first place. Oh, you keep adding in Tezuka in your Royal Pairing then I'll be alright, mostly.

Nnghh... I MUST STICK WITH THE TEZUKA ZONE. *Hugs Tezuka plushie desperately*

X3 Happy to read, it's fun after all and makes me happy.

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 02:27:50 UTC
I'll add Tezuka in my Royal Pair, and I'll definitely add Atobe in my Pillar. Tezuka - Ryoma - Atobe = my great circle.
*sigh.. OT3*

*tries to break the zone*

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athyestean November 29 2006, 23:01:45 UTC
Definitely fluffy. Definitely good. I liked it a lot.

I am starting to develop an AtobeRyoma infatuation... AND ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 00:21:11 UTC
I should add fluff to the genre too.. Forgot XP

Hey! *pouts* Not my fault that AtobeRyoma is snarky love + addicting + fun with all kinds of possibilities XD XD XD Not a bad thing if your infatuation grows deeper, believe me ;-)

That aside... Hope you enjoyed it! Glad, and thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 02:10:14 UTC
Thankies =)
Hmm.. AtoRyo fansite? Sure, why not :)

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arctic_dragon November 30 2006, 14:40:31 UTC
Just...*flails*
AtoRyo so cute and gorgoeus with the perfect side dish of teasing snarkiness with each other.
Loved it.

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cland3stin3 November 30 2006, 15:05:50 UTC
*catches you and squee*

Hehe... Glad you seem to like it. Thanks a LOT for reading and taking the time to comment ;)

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